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19 total reviews
Comment from Lucy de Welles
6 stars here. Really good! So funny. Shows a quirky mind. Picture perfect for text. Nothing to improve here.
Thank you for the opportunity to review your work.
Well done!
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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6 stars here. Really good! So funny. Shows a quirky mind. Picture perfect for text. Nothing to improve here.
Thank you for the opportunity to review your work.
Well done!
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Thanks, Lucy.
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Cheers!
Comment from robyn corum
Bill,
Come ON. For real? A new STRIPE?? That's how clever this guy is? I'm thinking it might be time to change things up. How about a dot? People would not be expecting a dot.
You know? Right in the center of his back, right? It's so perfect, I can't believe he didn't see it.
I have to do all the thinking. --sigh--
Annnnddd you're welcome. No charge.
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Bill,
Come ON. For real? A new STRIPE?? That's how clever this guy is? I'm thinking it might be time to change things up. How about a dot? People would not be expecting a dot.
You know? Right in the center of his back, right? It's so perfect, I can't believe he didn't see it.
I have to do all the thinking. --sigh--
Annnnddd you're welcome. No charge.
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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I think he started by covering dots and came to this.
Comment from January L'Angelle
I like this 575 poem. I really want to know, who is Efrem? Just for my own curiosity. Why not, Ezra, Ethan, Eric, Eli or Evan? I'm just joking with you! I love this poem. I don't have tattoo's, but Efrem the zebra sure does. You always have great poems... this is a very cool one. -January L.
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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I like this 575 poem. I really want to know, who is Efrem? Just for my own curiosity. Why not, Ezra, Ethan, Eric, Eli or Evan? I'm just joking with you! I love this poem. I don't have tattoo's, but Efrem the zebra sure does. You always have great poems... this is a very cool one. -January L.
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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There are 311 poems connected to this one. The rest pay 5 points and 12 cents. Isn't Efrem a cool name?
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It's a very cool name! For some unknown reason, I just like to razzle you. LOL. You're a good sport!
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
Without ythe picture, this wouldn't make as much sense, but this is a decent 5-7-5 poem. There is nothing that I can think of to improve things. Keep writing more like this.
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Without ythe picture, this wouldn't make as much sense, but this is a decent 5-7-5 poem. There is nothing that I can think of to improve things. Keep writing more like this.
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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There are 311 in the book. They are connected and all the rest pay 5 points and 12 cents.
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I will have to try to find it.
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At the top of the page is a link to the next chapters or poems.
Comment from nomi338
Exactly. What I would love to know is, what the heck is your message? If I fill a page with words that express a variety of messages that are largely unrelated, how is that artistic? many of the tatted people I observe nowadays, have so many different and unrelated tats on their bodies that they resemble a wall covered with graffiti.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Exactly. What I would love to know is, what the heck is your message? If I fill a page with words that express a variety of messages that are largely unrelated, how is that artistic? many of the tatted people I observe nowadays, have so many different and unrelated tats on their bodies that they resemble a wall covered with graffiti.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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I hear it all started with MOM on his arm.
Comment from damommy
I actually guffawed when I read this. Hilarious!
Does Efram know where he's going to put this new stripe? LOL
How you come up with these ideas is beyond me, but they're always funny.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017
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I actually guffawed when I read this. Hilarious!
Does Efram know where he's going to put this new stripe? LOL
How you come up with these ideas is beyond me, but they're always funny.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017
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Thank you, da, for the fun review. Bill
Comment from Ulla
Oh, Bill what are you like. I laughed out loud of this brilliant thought out 5-7-5. It's very well composed. I love it. As this called Horse World 1 I suppose there will be a no2. I'll have a look. Great writing. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017
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Oh, Bill what are you like. I laughed out loud of this brilliant thought out 5-7-5. It's very well composed. I love it. As this called Horse World 1 I suppose there will be a no2. I'll have a look. Great writing. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 20-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017
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Thank you, Ulla, for the great response to this. Bill
Comment from frogbook
Another eye opener to get us going this morning. Really clever and witty as well as giving me the laugh I needed. I bet people are so happy when you chose their art to see your wonderful visions within.
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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017
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Another eye opener to get us going this morning. Really clever and witty as well as giving me the laugh I needed. I bet people are so happy when you chose their art to see your wonderful visions within.
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Comment Written 20-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017
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Thanks, FB, for the kind review. Bill
Comment from Teri7
What a cute poem about a zebra that thought it was a horse and went for another tattoo! Very cute wording and imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017
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What a cute poem about a zebra that thought it was a horse and went for another tattoo! Very cute wording and imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
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Comment Written 20-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017
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Thanks, Teri.