Comment from Thal1959

Excellent

Oh, you dirty old man! I guessed it was for Dean's contest. Humorous, and with a touch of naughtiness. The boy with the kite comment was spot on. Only one typo -
"They table's not see through." They should be "the." Other than that, all is copasetic.

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2017

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Well you did cover the sense of touch.lol
When I started reading, I wondered which it was for and then saw it was for both. Very good idea and you covered both just fine...as only you could do it.lol

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2017

Comment from Nikki-Nicole

Excellent

This is a great script.
Very well-written.
Nicely polished.
The image shown supports the writing.
The author's notes are appreciated. Thank you.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your version of 'Dr. Terry Flying's Crumbling Crypt'.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-

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 Comment Written 11-Jun-2017

Comment from Rasmine

Excellent

Hello Mikey,

I have a suggestion and I found one typo: How do we know this Earth is any better than the last Earth we left (maybe omit the second Earth?)? They are booth (both) laughing.

Good luck in the contest.


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