Thoughtful Poems and Prose
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Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing this ABC poem depicting the life of a worker bee. They do an awful lot in their short lives, and they create a great life for their queen. Well done,
~patty~
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
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thank you for sharing this ABC poem depicting the life of a worker bee. They do an awful lot in their short lives, and they create a great life for their queen. Well done,
~patty~
Comment Written 06-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
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Thank you, Patty.
Nicole
Comment from Sasha
Nice work with this ABC entry. It flows nicely and I like it, especially because it actually tells a story. I wish you all the best in this contest.
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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
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Nice work with this ABC entry. It flows nicely and I like it, especially because it actually tells a story. I wish you all the best in this contest.
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Comment Written 06-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
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Thank you, Sasha.
Nicole
Comment from country ranch writer
Loyal to the queen is always seen and the buzzing is a constant reminder no one sleeps there job is never doe for she keeps a tight ship for all the honey to be collected and selected for pleasure of eating
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Loyal to the queen is always seen and the buzzing is a constant reminder no one sleeps there job is never doe for she keeps a tight ship for all the honey to be collected and selected for pleasure of eating
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Comment Written 06-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
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Thank you, Country Ranch Writer. I hope you are having a good day.
Nicole
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