Bugger it
Get off your High Horse - A new Con24 total reviews
Comment from JDRBAR
Yuck. Whenever that happens, and it does happen to us all, I swear I can feel the bug flying around in my stomach for the next week. LOL This is darling.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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Yuck. Whenever that happens, and it does happen to us all, I swear I can feel the bug flying around in my stomach for the next week. LOL This is darling.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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Hi JDRBAR, Thanks for reading my bug poem and yes it is always a gagging event LOL ManY Cheers Christine
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL! that is so funny, and it happens. Really well-written poem for this contest and I love the way you ended it. Well done and good luck! :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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LOL! that is so funny, and it happens. Really well-written poem for this contest and I love the way you ended it. Well done and good luck! :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 01-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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Hi Sandra, Thanks for reading my poem and it came third so that was good . Cheers for your review and good luck Christine xx
Comment from rjuselius
haha. lol. this is such a sweetheart of a poem dear anonmyous! it instantly got me in a good mood, bravo my friend!
thank you fro sharing!
good luck!
blessings!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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haha. lol. this is such a sweetheart of a poem dear anonmyous! it instantly got me in a good mood, bravo my friend!
thank you fro sharing!
good luck!
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 01-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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Hi Rebekka, Thanks for your read and review for my poem and I am glad it good you in a good mood it was a litle fun ome to think up and I came Third Many Cheers Christine . Sorry for delay in reply
Comment from Kazzawin
This is a really clever and fun piece!
You have followed the rules perfectly...love the last line and even though it is also the title it still surprised me.
The artwork is a stunning accompaniment to this quirky and witty poem.
Good luck in the contest: )
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2017
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This is a really clever and fun piece!
You have followed the rules perfectly...love the last line and even though it is also the title it still surprised me.
The artwork is a stunning accompaniment to this quirky and witty poem.
Good luck in the contest: )
Comment Written 01-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2017
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Hi Kazzawin, Thanks for reading my bug poem I enjoyed having fun writing this and glad you thought it quirky and witty and Cheers for your good luck wishes
Comment from Leena
An interesting and amusing attempt at 'Get off your high horse..' contest. The title is perfect. Clearly states how annoying could be the experience. Good work. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2017
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An interesting and amusing attempt at 'Get off your high horse..' contest. The title is perfect. Clearly states how annoying could be the experience. Good work. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2017
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Hi Leena, Thanks for your feedback for my Bug poem and for giving me noce feedback and sending best wishes Cheers
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Catching flies! Close your mouth! An unusual write and I will remember to close my mouth when I sleep, just in case a fly happens to pass by, a fun write and I wish you luck with the contest! Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2017
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Catching flies! Close your mouth! An unusual write and I will remember to close my mouth when I sleep, just in case a fly happens to pass by, a fun write and I wish you luck with the contest! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-May-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2017
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Hi Dolly, Ha Ha yes Make sure you do bit haven't you ever accidently swallowed a bug I have and thats what made me think this up LOL Thanks for your review Cheers
Comment from Bucketlist
How "Bugger it" brings back memories of England! This a cute poem. It's amazing where you found the inspiration for this contest entry
I have no suggestions for change.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2017
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How "Bugger it" brings back memories of England! This a cute poem. It's amazing where you found the inspiration for this contest entry
I have no suggestions for change.
Comment Written 31-May-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2017
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Hi Bucketlist It came from experience I have accidently swallowed a bug and you do cough and splutter so this competition made me think of that LOL Thanks for reading and reviewing this for me Cheers
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You are very welcome
Comment from Rasmine
I don't see any bad swears. This was very enjoyable and funny. I loved the beat and the rhyme. It must have been a frog talking.
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 31-May-2017
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I don't see any bad swears. This was very enjoyable and funny. I loved the beat and the rhyme. It must have been a frog talking.
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 31-May-2017
reply by the author on 31-May-2017
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Hi Rasmine,Thank you For your feedback,You have reassured me that this is OK without being offensive Glad you found this enjoyable ane funny Cheers
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Poet,
I loved the humor in your final 'satori' line of this short rhymed bug infested poem. I think you managed to cover all of the rules with your rhymes, your presentation, and the inclusion of a bug in your poem. Nice work!
I don't think you need a language warning.
Good luck in the contest!
Kim
reply by the author on 31-May-2017
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Hi Poet,
I loved the humor in your final 'satori' line of this short rhymed bug infested poem. I think you managed to cover all of the rules with your rhymes, your presentation, and the inclusion of a bug in your poem. Nice work!
I don't think you need a language warning.
Good luck in the contest!
Kim
Comment Written 31-May-2017
reply by the author on 31-May-2017
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Hi Kim, Thanks for your reassurance re rhe language it was done in fun and not to offend, So Thanks for that and your good luck is appreciated Cheers
Comment from smerryman3
Fun, funny, and cute! You did a great job using punctuation, capitalization and word arrangement to the best advantage. I always find punctuating poetry to be the hardest part.
Two small nit picks:
I believe splutterd is spelled "spluttered"
And your last period should be inside the quotations.
reply by the author on 31-May-2017
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Fun, funny, and cute! You did a great job using punctuation, capitalization and word arrangement to the best advantage. I always find punctuating poetry to be the hardest part.
Two small nit picks:
I believe splutterd is spelled "spluttered"
And your last period should be inside the quotations.
Comment Written 31-May-2017
reply by the author on 31-May-2017
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Hi Smeeryman3 Thank you for stopping by to read my Bug poem and for your help re spellin and punctuation. I have corrected both Many Cheers