By God's grace..
story starting with the sentence...12 total reviews
Comment from KL Williams
Wonderful story you unfolded from the writing prompt. I was captivated and didn't see the turn of events coming. I am now interested in what is to become of Mrs. Laila. Great story, and good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2017
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Wonderful story you unfolded from the writing prompt. I was captivated and didn't see the turn of events coming. I am now interested in what is to become of Mrs. Laila. Great story, and good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 29-May-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much.
Comment from royowen
Nicely written story, a clever plot with excellent characters, but she got caught, it just goes to show, one shouldn't open the door to just,anyone, no matter how good the story. A most enjoyable story, imaginative. Good luck with the contest, blessings, Roy
Typo : helped me (me) to sit up on the sofa. Needs editing, some trouble with spacing.
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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2017
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Nicely written story, a clever plot with excellent characters, but she got caught, it just goes to show, one shouldn't open the door to just,anyone, no matter how good the story. A most enjoyable story, imaginative. Good luck with the contest, blessings, Roy
Typo : helped me (me) to sit up on the sofa. Needs editing, some trouble with spacing.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 29-May-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much.
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Most welcome