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Comment from Teri7
Michael, It has been a long time since I reviewed your work, but I had to take a look at this poem. You used such great and beautiful wording and the imagery was really awesome. Great job my friend. Teri
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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Michael, It has been a long time since I reviewed your work, but I had to take a look at this poem. You used such great and beautiful wording and the imagery was really awesome. Great job my friend. Teri
Comment Written 29-May-2017
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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Hi...Teri...-smile-
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I'm glad you did stop by....hope alls been well in your personal world. mines been....changed. thank God I keep getting younger...-wink-....love Michael
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing this beautiful piece. Each word is carefully placed to take the reader to somewhere where they can appreciate the beauty of our world.
The animated picture works well here, it allows the reader to contemplate deeply,
~patty~
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thank you for sharing this beautiful piece. Each word is carefully placed to take the reader to somewhere where they can appreciate the beauty of our world.
The animated picture works well here, it allows the reader to contemplate deeply,
~patty~
Comment Written 29-May-2017
Comment from Bucketlist
Hi, this is a lovely tribute to God's nature. I enjoyed the animation of the picture. It is indeed a besutiful part of creation.I hope I interpreted your poetry correctly.
Thanks for sharing, and keep writing
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Hi, this is a lovely tribute to God's nature. I enjoyed the animation of the picture. It is indeed a besutiful part of creation.I hope I interpreted your poetry correctly.
Thanks for sharing, and keep writing
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Comment Written 29-May-2017
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the bittersweet rhythm of the process and law of Nature and God's rhyme of activities within God's world in God's note for infinite actions and ours living; I liked.
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This speaks the bittersweet rhythm of the process and law of Nature and God's rhyme of activities within God's world in God's note for infinite actions and ours living; I liked.
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Comment Written 29-May-2017
Comment from RGstar
Oh, brilliant. I love the way you take the elements and then infuse direction in passing them through the ''you'' the entity, the personal. So gives it the depth...apart from beautiful adjectives and nouns, you stamp your trademark. This one easier on the narrative which gives it the charm such a poem deserves.
I HONESTLY...never tire of reading from you, I always know the write will be deep, and even if have to work at it, I see you.
''One knee finds this morning
bowed hostage to so beautiful
it can't stand''
My brother, what pleasure and deep emotion of warmth to a friend, knowing the above came from you.
Any poet here on this site would do well to construct such a meaning in such poetic tones and voice.
Bravo, Bravo.
I so love when something is good, it gives as much pleasure, most times, more, as if written myself.
And he sentence there, I could only dream of writing such a meaningful section. Poetry in motion...dare anybody to tell me different.
Love this Michael.
Made my day.
Best wishes. I would like to see this in Poem of the month as an entry next time. Deserves.
Best wishes.
RG ....truly loved it.
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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Oh, brilliant. I love the way you take the elements and then infuse direction in passing them through the ''you'' the entity, the personal. So gives it the depth...apart from beautiful adjectives and nouns, you stamp your trademark. This one easier on the narrative which gives it the charm such a poem deserves.
I HONESTLY...never tire of reading from you, I always know the write will be deep, and even if have to work at it, I see you.
''One knee finds this morning
bowed hostage to so beautiful
it can't stand''
My brother, what pleasure and deep emotion of warmth to a friend, knowing the above came from you.
Any poet here on this site would do well to construct such a meaning in such poetic tones and voice.
Bravo, Bravo.
I so love when something is good, it gives as much pleasure, most times, more, as if written myself.
And he sentence there, I could only dream of writing such a meaningful section. Poetry in motion...dare anybody to tell me different.
Love this Michael.
Made my day.
Best wishes. I would like to see this in Poem of the month as an entry next time. Deserves.
Best wishes.
RG ....truly loved it.
Comment Written 29-May-2017
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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I've been riding on high all day long
because your review woke me up. as ive said every time read, and what all who do know, you speak life to musical experience through poetic expression like born for...so naturally your head nod holds power. love ya Brother. Michael
Comment from MissMerri
An emotional lament crying out for something seemingly just beyond reach yet visible and believable as the breaking day... and immeasurably beautiful before "evening lets space distance us again." I feel there is so much more to these emotional lines than I am mentally comprehending but the impact on my heart is as beautiful as the sunrise and unmistakable as the sound of song. I am once more moved and buoyed by the rising tide of emotion found in your words. Thank you for sharing your poet's heart.
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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An emotional lament crying out for something seemingly just beyond reach yet visible and believable as the breaking day... and immeasurably beautiful before "evening lets space distance us again." I feel there is so much more to these emotional lines than I am mentally comprehending but the impact on my heart is as beautiful as the sunrise and unmistakable as the sound of song. I am once more moved and buoyed by the rising tide of emotion found in your words. Thank you for sharing your poet's heart.
Comment Written 29-May-2017
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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Hey -bigsmile-
yes I wrote a Psalm last night. so alone I had to come out or surely heartbeat myself to death. I couldnt see the sunrise for some reason. It frightened me...besides I needed to get some sleep....-smile-....I love you Meadow. Michael