Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks of feelings and emotions before scribing and after scribing the words as confessed followed rules and instructions for helping readers and reviewers; I liked.

 Comment Written 29-May-2017

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reply by the author on 30-May-2017

Hi Alcreator Litt Dear, Many Thanks for your review and it was a challenge to write and I am pleased to have your feedback and that you liked it Cheers

Comment from oliver818

Excellent

I like the humor in your piece, it's fun. Your poem flows well and is easy to read, and I think you fulfilled the requirements of the competition. Thanks for sharing and have a great day

 Comment Written 29-May-2017

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reply by the author on 29-May-2017

Hi Oliver, Thanks for reading and reviewing this one and for your vote of completing the requirement and yes it was just fun to write. Your feedback is appreciated Cheers

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Kudos to you for some of these very unique list of word forms. For example, I was surprised by "requires and enquiry" but it shows you really know your word roots.
But I don't think that "Silly Billy" is another form of "syllable" as in:
"Not be a 'Silly Billy' unable to use syllable."

 Comment Written 29-May-2017

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reply by the author on 29-May-2017

Hi lyenochka, Ha Ha Yes I did take a wide bow ( Poetic licence LOL) when I used 'Silly Billy' So forgive my attempt at trying to match if you can come up with one for syllable please let me know I may have to change it is it doesn't meet requirement. But I do Thank you very much for your review it is much appreciated. Cheers

reply by lyenochka on 29-May-2017

You could use "syllabic" or "syllabify" or "syllabification"

reply by the author on 29-May-2017

Oh Thank you so much. I have use syllabification Your help is so appreciated now it should be on the right track Cheers Cheers Cheers

reply by the author on 29-May-2017

Thank you so very much I have used Syllabification to compliment syllable and now feel it works so much better I do appreciate your help Cheers

reply by lyenochka on 29-May-2017

You're most welcome. I read a couple more DwaRazy poems and was mystified so I read the rules again. I thought it had to be the same root word but it can be much more creative than that. So pardon my review. Please change to whatever you like best.

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

Creating confusion in confused creators
For subjects debated by subjectable debators.

This sounds like the contest judges.


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 Comment Written 28-May-2017

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reply by the author on 28-May-2017

ha ha I hope not Thomas I need them on my side LOL. No just a bit of fun and I do thank you very much for reading and reviewing my DwaRazy entry It was challenging to write, right? Cheers

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Well, to be completely honest I do not know what type of poem this is you have written, but I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Best wishes if it is a contest entry. Teri

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 Comment Written 28-May-2017

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reply by the author on 28-May-2017

Hi Teri, Thank you so much for my first review for this poem ( I hope it is not my last LOL) Yes this style is new to me and I thought I would try it out to see what I could come up with. This is a DwaRazy which in Polish means using a word twice but in a different way each line. I had to look it up to see how to do this but I did have fun trying to get what I did write, right. Ha Ha. This is my first attempt at this and I hope the readers enjoy my warped sense of humour Thanks so much for your great rating Cheers