Knock on the door
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about the changes in pattern of state of living after a certain period of time, despite thought of losing and gaining in view, the passion for music gets regularised; I liked.
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This speaks about the changes in pattern of state of living after a certain period of time, despite thought of losing and gaining in view, the passion for music gets regularised; I liked.
Comment Written 26-May-2017
Comment from tfawcus
A splendid period piece with all the romantic charm of yesteryear, when courting was more of an art than it is these days! The only thing that I feel compelled to point out is that the contest dictates that your story needs to start with the actual words "There was a knock on the door". Yours doesn't - not yet, anyway!
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A splendid period piece with all the romantic charm of yesteryear, when courting was more of an art than it is these days! The only thing that I feel compelled to point out is that the contest dictates that your story needs to start with the actual words "There was a knock on the door". Yours doesn't - not yet, anyway!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-May-2017
