Just You Wait
Bullied no more31 total reviews
Comment from apky
So one day when you hate your job
and don't make the big dough,
come see me for a visit
'cuz I'll be CEO!
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Yup, this could have been the story of so many kids out there. That ending absolutely rocked!
Good luck with this,
Apky
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So one day when you hate your job
and don't make the big dough,
come see me for a visit
'cuz I'll be CEO!
'
Yup, this could have been the story of so many kids out there. That ending absolutely rocked!
Good luck with this,
Apky
Comment Written 26-May-2017
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
haha that ought to tell the bullies! I enjoyed your poem. Good job on the rhymes & smooth flow & the message. This isn't categorized as a poem. Best wishes in the contest. Jan
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haha that ought to tell the bullies! I enjoyed your poem. Good job on the rhymes & smooth flow & the message. This isn't categorized as a poem. Best wishes in the contest. Jan
Comment Written 26-May-2017
Comment from smerryman3
Way to nail it! All kids can relate to this but especially those who have been bullied or made fun of. Good job combining an important lesson with a little humor!
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Way to nail it! All kids can relate to this but especially those who have been bullied or made fun of. Good job combining an important lesson with a little humor!
Comment Written 26-May-2017
Comment from LaRosa
It certainly must be the story of so many kids, adults too.
My granddaughter expressed very much the same emotion to me very recently. She's happy with her 'nerds'! Can' blame her, they're awesome.
I'm sure that children would enjoy your poem, perhaps even in book form. ???
Simple, to the point, emotional, but uplifting.
You did a great job.
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It certainly must be the story of so many kids, adults too.
My granddaughter expressed very much the same emotion to me very recently. She's happy with her 'nerds'! Can' blame her, they're awesome.
I'm sure that children would enjoy your poem, perhaps even in book form. ???
Simple, to the point, emotional, but uplifting.
You did a great job.
Comment Written 26-May-2017
Comment from emptypage
I adore this poem. I am--or was--a nerd. Not of the computer variety, but of the I-like-to-learn variety. It was tough. You would think thirteen years of Catholic school would garner a person some support, but I think the kids are meaner there than they are in public school.
Your poem made me laugh a couple of times. I love the moral of the story. Great post--you have my vote.
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I adore this poem. I am--or was--a nerd. Not of the computer variety, but of the I-like-to-learn variety. It was tough. You would think thirteen years of Catholic school would garner a person some support, but I think the kids are meaner there than they are in public school.
Your poem made me laugh a couple of times. I love the moral of the story. Great post--you have my vote.
Comment Written 26-May-2017
Comment from JDRBAR
Excellent. A great motivational poem. Well written with no nits, clearly expressed, and great to read. Good luck with this in the contest. To me, it's a clear winner.
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Excellent. A great motivational poem. Well written with no nits, clearly expressed, and great to read. Good luck with this in the contest. To me, it's a clear winner.
Comment Written 26-May-2017
Comment from Leena
Read somewhere long back.. 'Be nice to the nerds, you may end up working for them.' Also one who gets bullied might be the one having the last laugh when the tables get turned! A nice attempt at motivational poem for kids. Best wishes.
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Read somewhere long back.. 'Be nice to the nerds, you may end up working for them.' Also one who gets bullied might be the one having the last laugh when the tables get turned! A nice attempt at motivational poem for kids. Best wishes.
Comment Written 26-May-2017
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I love it when a bullied child comes out on top. Bullies are all cowards when on their own. I just wish all children realised that. Well done to your brother if this is was like him. I bet your proud of him. Well done and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
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I love it when a bullied child comes out on top. Bullies are all cowards when on their own. I just wish all children realised that. Well done to your brother if this is was like him. I bet your proud of him. Well done and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 26-May-2017
Comment from Mustang Patty
I think this could be the story of Bill Gates, too. He probably wasn't the most popular kid in his class, but he certainly beat them all now! I think this would be a good story to tell kids when they are bullied.
~patty~
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I think this could be the story of Bill Gates, too. He probably wasn't the most popular kid in his class, but he certainly beat them all now! I think this would be a good story to tell kids when they are bullied.
~patty~
Comment Written 26-May-2017
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Poet,
This is soooo true! All the nerds in high school turn out to be the successful people in real life and all the jocks and cheerleaders don't know what to do with themselves after all the attention fades!! Good luck!
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Dear Mystery Poet,
This is soooo true! All the nerds in high school turn out to be the successful people in real life and all the jocks and cheerleaders don't know what to do with themselves after all the attention fades!! Good luck!
Comment Written 26-May-2017