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Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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mikey, considering my family, I think this is perfect for Mother's Day. You have gotten so talented at these scripts and on such a variety of topics. Love it, my friend. The only Happy Mother's Day I got was from a stranger at a convenience store. My family would make good fertilizer~Debbie

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 Comment Written 18-May-2017


reply by the author on 18-May-2017
    Aww, well happy belated Mother's Day. Some ungrateful whelps just don't know how good they have it!!
    So pleased you like this. I'm getting a little more confident as time goes by. I'll keep your peeps in mind organically speaking. LOL! Mike
Comment from Gloria ....
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Oh man, for a minute I thought this was going to be about Chauncey, Mav. Your script writing skills just keep getting better and better. The fade in sets the scene perfectly. Seriously though, there is nothing more fun than watering the garden. Hmmm that almost sounds a little raunchy.

Good wisdom in that--idle hands are the devil's workshop, or so I've heard.

HAHA. I laughed at Old Lady's Dieter's Collie dog. Of course it's a dog.

This is a lot of fun and my guess is there will be "fishy" fertilizer in the neighbourhood. I might need some of that.

Super job my dear.

Ange


 Comment Written 18-May-2017


reply by the author on 18-May-2017
    You're way too sweet, Ange, but I'm encouraged nonetheless. I still feel like I'm writing a story and TRYING to break into script mode. But I feel like I'm heading that way at least. HA! Yes, I had Chauncey on my mind though no intention of using anything about him in the story. Anything about gardening or Louise triggers an image of him. Glad your liking this. I'm always amenable to providing any of your gardening needs, watering or what have you. :))

    Mav

Comment from Sasha
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I am not sure it is in the spirit of Mother's Day either, but you definitely capture my attention with this one. Not sure where it is headed but I plan to follow it to the end. Unique and a fun story too.

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 Comment Written 18-May-2017


reply by the author on 18-May-2017
    I'm not sure either but it looks like it may be a bit on the dark side. Great to hear from you. So pleased you enjoyed. mike