Clouds of Adversity
free verse15 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Another great message in verse, Patricia! In the spring, we have rain and sun often at the same time. But in the storms and sunshine of life, we so need to know that God is with us.
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Another great message in verse, Patricia! In the spring, we have rain and sun often at the same time. But in the storms and sunshine of life, we so need to know that God is with us.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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Thanks for the lovely review,. I appreciate your lovely reviews.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and true poem you have penned about the storms of life. I have one question
After the storms have past
should that be passed?
Passes means to be gone already, but past means like what has happened before - the past? Is this right! love, Teri
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This is a very beautiful and true poem you have penned about the storms of life. I have one question
After the storms have past
should that be passed?
Passes means to be gone already, but past means like what has happened before - the past? Is this right! love, Teri
Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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Thanks for the lovely review, Teri. Have a lovely day my friend.
Comment from zanya
Such comforting religious sentiments expressed here in these stanzas - a sense of trust and hope in the Lord even in the midst of our greatest earthly trials -and an interesting pic
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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Such comforting religious sentiments expressed here in these stanzas - a sense of trust and hope in the Lord even in the midst of our greatest earthly trials -and an interesting pic
Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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Thanks for the lovely review, zanya. I'm always appreciative of your reviews.
Comment from Ronni
This is a most uplifting and consoling message and reassuring kind of quiet,
personal meditation, with the darkening clouds, in metamorphic darkening
clouds of adversity. Picture so visually in spiritual vibrations sets
the peaceful calm, aware and knowing Savior is and was always there,
guiding and leading on. Thanks for sharing this beautiful and benevolent
message and presentation.
Blessings and best wishes, Ronni
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This is a most uplifting and consoling message and reassuring kind of quiet,
personal meditation, with the darkening clouds, in metamorphic darkening
clouds of adversity. Picture so visually in spiritual vibrations sets
the peaceful calm, aware and knowing Savior is and was always there,
guiding and leading on. Thanks for sharing this beautiful and benevolent
message and presentation.
Blessings and best wishes, Ronni
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Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
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Thanks for the lovely review, Ronnie. Your reviews are always a pleasure to read.
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a very nice free verse poem, Patricia, with image to match. I agree that it's comforting to have Him with us through adversity and through good times, too. Marilyn
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This is a very nice free verse poem, Patricia, with image to match. I agree that it's comforting to have Him with us through adversity and through good times, too. Marilyn
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Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
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Thanks for the lovely review, Marilyn. Your reviews are always a pleasure.