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Comment from BOO ghost
waterfalls are tranquil. Alaska is the Last Frontier. We must set aside wildlife preserves where man can not touch or do harm or every species on earth will become extinct because of Mother nature's chain reaction to pollutants and chopping down forests and killing animals, mammals like the whale. I am sure there is a special cathedral in the Mohave desert wilderness to be close to god. A temple. Be too hot for BOO. Well done Lion King you scored again. Count your doubloon
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waterfalls are tranquil. Alaska is the Last Frontier. We must set aside wildlife preserves where man can not touch or do harm or every species on earth will become extinct because of Mother nature's chain reaction to pollutants and chopping down forests and killing animals, mammals like the whale. I am sure there is a special cathedral in the Mohave desert wilderness to be close to god. A temple. Be too hot for BOO. Well done Lion King you scored again. Count your doubloon
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
Comment from nordicgirl
Michael
I know this is something dear to your heart. I have never seen you approach something with such innocence I guess is the word. This is quite moving and honest. It comes across as simple truth. At least to me it does. Wonderful. NG
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Michael
I know this is something dear to your heart. I have never seen you approach something with such innocence I guess is the word. This is quite moving and honest. It comes across as simple truth. At least to me it does. Wonderful. NG
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
Comment from Sankey
Loved this old buddy. Made me feel I was right there with the storyteller. Good work and not a spag to be found anywhere. One or two chapters of my book still up with Revive Certificates if interested. Getting a lot of help with some of my weird punctuation. Allowing of course for the American view which sometimes disagrees with mine hehe.
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Loved this old buddy. Made me feel I was right there with the storyteller. Good work and not a spag to be found anywhere. One or two chapters of my book still up with Revive Certificates if interested. Getting a lot of help with some of my weird punctuation. Allowing of course for the American view which sometimes disagrees with mine hehe.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
This is definitely a very well written descriptive piece and a nice place even with the apology for what we have pushed on the Earth.
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This is definitely a very well written descriptive piece and a nice place even with the apology for what we have pushed on the Earth.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I've enjoyed reading your wonderful post. You teach me so much about writing every time I read your work. I agree with you, we are trashing our planet. We need to stop now.
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I've enjoyed reading your wonderful post. You teach me so much about writing every time I read your work. I agree with you, we are trashing our planet. We need to stop now.
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Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
Comment from damommy
This is a wonderful piece. He found his Eden at last, and may be the only one left. It sounds as if he's the last man on Earth.
Your descriptions were very vivid. The water flowing like faith from our heart. The laughter and joy in plunging and taking the ride.
This reminds me a lot of St. Francis who went out to preach in the woods because no one would listen to him.
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This is a wonderful piece. He found his Eden at last, and may be the only one left. It sounds as if he's the last man on Earth.
Your descriptions were very vivid. The water flowing like faith from our heart. The laughter and joy in plunging and taking the ride.
This reminds me a lot of St. Francis who went out to preach in the woods because no one would listen to him.
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Comment Written 02-Apr-2017