Grammy's Memoirs 2018
Viewing comments for Prologue "Prologue"Bits and pieces of my life for my grandchildren
51 total reviews
Comment from Mabaker
This has all the promise of another great read. Your style is so easy to read and your life story will be read with pleasure and possibly some pain as we your readers see in ourselves what your record. Good job. Regards Mabaker.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2017
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This has all the promise of another great read. Your style is so easy to read and your life story will be read with pleasure and possibly some pain as we your readers see in ourselves what your record. Good job. Regards Mabaker.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2017
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Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your lovely words and the array of stars. I believe this project will continue to show me how much I've grown. I thank you for being willing to take the journey with me,
~patty~
Comment from frierajac
There is another word as well, which means introductory remarks, which are as your author's notes here. The word is proems. It isn't used often. I hope to read some of the non-fiction you have in mind.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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There is another word as well, which means introductory remarks, which are as your author's notes here. The word is proems. It isn't used often. I hope to read some of the non-fiction you have in mind.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your lovely words and the array of stars. I believe this project will continue to show me how much I've grown. I thank you for being willing to take the journey with me,
~patty~
Comment from sunnilicious
Congratulations on your writing career. Work or hobby, it's a nice accomplishment. Well thought out and clearly written. Old letters can hold good sentimental value. Good prologue. Good luck :)
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Congratulations on your writing career. Work or hobby, it's a nice accomplishment. Well thought out and clearly written. Old letters can hold good sentimental value. Good prologue. Good luck :)
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your lovely words and the array of stars. I believe this project will continue to show me how much I've grown. I thank you for being willing to take the journey with me,
~patty~
Comment from kriver
Hi Patty,
It sounds like it will be an interesting story.
I believe as you write
you'll be able to see the hand
of the LORD working through your life.
I think it will be interesting to read about all the things
that the LORD has brought you through and has done in your life.
Best regards,
K River
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Hi Patty,
It sounds like it will be an interesting story.
I believe as you write
you'll be able to see the hand
of the LORD working through your life.
I think it will be interesting to read about all the things
that the LORD has brought you through and has done in your life.
Best regards,
K River
Comment Written 01-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your lovely words and the array of stars. I believe this project will continue to show me how much I've grown. I thank you for being willing to take the journey with me,
~patty~
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Patty, this preview has piqued my interest as I enjoy reading stories and memoirs of for me interesting people and their lives. You fall into that category. Looking forward to this book and your succeeding chapters. I wish you the best in the endeavor my friend,,,,,,,Jim
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Patty, this preview has piqued my interest as I enjoy reading stories and memoirs of for me interesting people and their lives. You fall into that category. Looking forward to this book and your succeeding chapters. I wish you the best in the endeavor my friend,,,,,,,Jim
Comment Written 01-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your lovely words and the array of stars. I believe this project will continue to show me how much I've grown. I thank you for being willing to take the journey with me,
~patty~
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Patty, I love these journeys and will truly forward to it!
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Mustangpatty1029,
Nice piece of Biological Non-Fiction beautifully leading the reader to read/know further!
Spontaneous flow having impressive phraseology.
Interesting, and this sentence "My grown children are still a source of joy, though not always." makes it more interesting and worth reading because it promises to bring in light the writer's true feelings devoid of artificiality.
Most Welcome!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Hello Mustangpatty1029,
Nice piece of Biological Non-Fiction beautifully leading the reader to read/know further!
Spontaneous flow having impressive phraseology.
Interesting, and this sentence "My grown children are still a source of joy, though not always." makes it more interesting and worth reading because it promises to bring in light the writer's true feelings devoid of artificiality.
Most Welcome!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your lovely words and the array of stars. I believe this project will continue to show me how much I've grown as a writer. I thank you for being willing to take the journey with me,
~patty~
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Sounds like a rough childhood. I had one as well, but like you am happy to be where I am today ans doing better than I dreamed of. I look forward to reading more, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Sounds like a rough childhood. I had one as well, but like you am happy to be where I am today ans doing better than I dreamed of. I look forward to reading more, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 01-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your lovely words and the array of stars. I believe this project will continue to show me how much I've grown as a writer. I thank you for being willing to take the journey with me,
~patty~
Comment from robyn corum
Patty,
I am glad to hear that you are happy and contented with the life you now live. That is a great place to be! *smile* I will look forward to reading about your experiences.
Now, some notes:
1.) Nor the young girl (who) had to fight off her mother's
--> when it's a person, it's a 'who' not a 'that'
2.) I have a husband (who) loves me.
Thanks! Good luck in your story-telling!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Patty,
I am glad to hear that you are happy and contented with the life you now live. That is a great place to be! *smile* I will look forward to reading about your experiences.
Now, some notes:
1.) Nor the young girl (who) had to fight off her mother's
--> when it's a person, it's a 'who' not a 'that'
2.) I have a husband (who) loves me.
Thanks! Good luck in your story-telling!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your lovely words and the array of stars. I believe this project will continue to show me how much I've grown as a writer. I thank you for being willing to take the journey with me,
~patty~
ps-thank you for the notes
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm so pleased your mother wrote that letter to you before she died, it's important to know that after the trauma you went through in your life, she did come through for you and let you know how proud she was. I look forward to reading your story. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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I'm so pleased your mother wrote that letter to you before she died, it's important to know that after the trauma you went through in your life, she did come through for you and let you know how proud she was. I look forward to reading your story. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 01-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your lovely words and the array of stars. I believe this project will continue to show me how much I've grown as a writer. I thank you for being willing to take the journey with me,
~patty~
Comment from Badger_29
You have managed to convey such strength in overcoming. You speak of the obstacles, but do not dwell on them.. It is bizarre, but when I look into the eyes of the 18 year old in the picture, she seems to have a resolve and confidence that rises above all that will come. We seem to be in a similar state of contentment.
I really appreciate the candor, honesty,, and human tragomedy behind this superb writing. It stands the test of time by itself, yet is intrinsically connected to the collective (positive) consciousness. PS tragomedy is a word that I created to combine these elements, similar to "simplicated"
Blessings,
Brother Badger
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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You have managed to convey such strength in overcoming. You speak of the obstacles, but do not dwell on them.. It is bizarre, but when I look into the eyes of the 18 year old in the picture, she seems to have a resolve and confidence that rises above all that will come. We seem to be in a similar state of contentment.
I really appreciate the candor, honesty,, and human tragomedy behind this superb writing. It stands the test of time by itself, yet is intrinsically connected to the collective (positive) consciousness. PS tragomedy is a word that I created to combine these elements, similar to "simplicated"
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment Written 01-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your lovely words and the array of stars. I believe this project will continue to show me how much I've grown as a writer. I thank you for being willing to take the journey with me,
~patty~