Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This Essence poem, Frog in the Fog, has the proper structure and also nullifies our fears or what lurks out in the mysterious veil of mist. The world of simplicity and subtleties hides in the translucence. Nice.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2017

Thanks. But are you sure there's nothing else lurking there? LOL Glad you liked my poem.

Comment from Donya Quijote

Excellent

Your poem seem to meet the criteria set forth to the best of my understanding. Nice presentation over all. Best of luck in the contest...

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2017

Thanks. Glad you liked my little poem.

Comment from Alex Biasin

Excellent

This seemed like a very difficult challenge.
You succeeded admirably with a delightful poem, that rhymed well and told a small story as well.
The artwork matched perfectly, though I could almost see Kermit at the beginning of the Muppet movie singing Rainbow Connection as I read this through.
Good job.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2017

Thanks. The essence poem is a little harder than it looks, but it's fun. Glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from wondertwin

Excellent

Nice job with Frog in the Fog! great image to accompany your poem. You have my vote, I hope you win :) :) Blessings, AmyJo

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2017

Thanks so much for the vote and the great review.

Comment from mvbrooks

Excellent

You seem to have met all the requirements of this two-line essence poem and at the same time, created a fun tongue-twister. Fun, whimsical poem.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2017

Thanks. I'm so glad you liked my little poem.

Comment from Jax the Moonchild

Good

I enjoy the happiness of this poem, although i feel that the picture that goes with it contains a more spiritual and blissful feeling than that "ghostly" makes the image seem darker then what the picture portrays other than that though, i really like the simplicity of the poem.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017

Thanks for reading and reviewing

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

What a cute Essence Poem! The picture is magical, and certainly is hiding that frog, because I can't see it! A lovely entry, good luck, blessings...

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2017

Thanks. That frog is well hidden. Nobody's found him yet, including me. LOL Glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Love the artwork that drew me in to reading your essence poem. And I love what you've done here, and eerie fog hiding the frog on the log, how eerie when said frog croaks. Good one, and good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2017

Thanks. The frog croaking is something I hadn't thought about. It certainly would add to the scene. Only problem is I'd need a longer poem.

Comment from Grasshopper2

Excellent

Your ode about a frog on a log in ghostly fog meets the contest rules
smack dab on! Two lines

Ghostly fog covers bog
Mostly hides frog on log

The essence of your poem contains an internal rhyme and an ending rhyme.
Each line meets the six syllables per line requirement. Good luck with voting.

Grasshopper

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2017

Thanks. So glad you enjoyed.

Comment from winnona

Excellent

A very well-written contest entry. Your words flowed well and combined easily forming the message of the poem for the reader. You have created an image of the little guys sitting in the fog that brings a realistic quality to the poem.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2017

Thanks. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.