2017 JAPANESE POETRY
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "haiku (seagull cries at dawn)"A collection of Japanese poetry
33 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
Gorgeous picture and presentation to compliment this lovely haiku. I loved each line and the satori is perfection. A joy to read.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Gorgeous picture and presentation to compliment this lovely haiku. I loved each line and the satori is perfection. A joy to read.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 08-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the six stars, Janet, you are very kind :)
Gypsy Blue Rose
Haiku Instructor and club chairperson
Member of the Haiku Society of America
Comment from F. Wehr3
Nice! I enjoyed this one. I actually had to go look the precise definition of affinity, to reaffirm what you were portraying. Of course I could have just looked down out the author notes. Well done from one Buddha to another.
Take care,
Russell
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Nice! I enjoyed this one. I actually had to go look the precise definition of affinity, to reaffirm what you were portraying. Of course I could have just looked down out the author notes. Well done from one Buddha to another.
Take care,
Russell
Comment Written 08-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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:) thank you, Russell :)
Gypsy Blue Rose
Haiku Instructor and club chairperson
Member of the Haiku Society of America
Comment from strivinginsc
Visual and the sound puts you right in the mist. Its amazing the endless thoughts theses sounds bring. This one is a winner to my senses. Well written and heartfelt thought went into this simple creation.
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Visual and the sound puts you right in the mist. Its amazing the endless thoughts theses sounds bring. This one is a winner to my senses. Well written and heartfelt thought went into this simple creation.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2017
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wow, thank you for the six stars, my friend, you are very kind :)
Gypsy Blue Rose
Haiku Instructor and club chairperson
Member of the Haiku Society of America
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Gypsy, Your poem is beautifully, deliciously, eerie.
Great satori connecting lines:
seagull cries at dawn
as I sip salty tears--
(Vivid imagery. I can see it; I can hear it.)
Lovely artwork choice. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBoomer
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Hello Gypsy, Your poem is beautifully, deliciously, eerie.
Great satori connecting lines:
seagull cries at dawn
as I sip salty tears--
(Vivid imagery. I can see it; I can hear it.)
Lovely artwork choice. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBoomer
Comment Written 07-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Hello, my friend, I see you know about haiku. It's a pleasure to make your acquaintance. :) Thank you for reading me.
Buddha blessings,
Gypsy Blue Rose
Haiku instructor
Member of the Haiku Society of America
a new haiku class every month....
Do you haiku? Check out the haiku club. It's a place for fun and learning.
Comment from Irish Rain
Oh, how beautiful is this!? I am out of sixes, but how I love the salty tears, and the seagulls crying at dawn...affinity. How clever. I have a CD of ocean sounds, I love it. This is a gem, blessings...
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Oh, how beautiful is this!? I am out of sixes, but how I love the salty tears, and the seagulls crying at dawn...affinity. How clever. I have a CD of ocean sounds, I love it. This is a gem, blessings...
Comment Written 07-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Hello, my friend, :) Thank you for reading me.
Buddha blessings,
Gypsy Blue Rose
Haiku instructor
Member of the Haiku Society of America
a new haiku class every month....
Do you haiku? Check out the haiku club. It's a place for fun and learning.
Comment from Sasha
I understand how the seagulls and ocean waves ambiance sound inspired this lovely haiku. Beautiful poem for your friends anniversary. Very nice artistic presentation too.
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I understand how the seagulls and ocean waves ambiance sound inspired this lovely haiku. Beautiful poem for your friends anniversary. Very nice artistic presentation too.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Hello, my friend, :) Thank you for reading me.
Buddha blessings,
Gypsy Blue Rose
Haiku instructor
Member of the Haiku Society of America
a new haiku class every month....
Do you haiku? Check out the haiku club. It's a place for fun and learning.
Comment from robyn corum
Gypsy,
I have to say I do not like this poem - not on the merits of the poem - it's actually lovely. But I do not like to think of you crying, my friend. Whether it's metaphorically or in real life. Take away the tears! *smile* Sorry. No tears, please. I like my gypsy laughing.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Gypsy,
I have to say I do not like this poem - not on the merits of the poem - it's actually lovely. But I do not like to think of you crying, my friend. Whether it's metaphorically or in real life. Take away the tears! *smile* Sorry. No tears, please. I like my gypsy laughing.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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LoL I am happy! No worries, little sister. All is good.
btw... I received your letter, thank you, sweetie pie, luv ya.
Thank you for reading me.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Gypsy A great Haiku that has captured the moment beautifully. Excellent Satori that combines lines one and two to express your affinity to the seagull cries and you crying salty tears. Did the seagull cries provoke a sadness in you ? Cheers Christine
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Hi Gypsy A great Haiku that has captured the moment beautifully. Excellent Satori that combines lines one and two to express your affinity to the seagull cries and you crying salty tears. Did the seagull cries provoke a sadness in you ? Cheers Christine
Comment Written 07-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Sometimes you hear a song and it makes you melancholic for a minute... that is all. Everything is good. :)
Thank you for reading me.
Buddha blessings,
Gypsy Blue Rose
Haiku instructor
Member of the Haiku Society of America
a new haiku class every month....
Do you haiku? Check out the haiku club. It's a place for fun and learning.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written haiku. The early morning sounds are always the best and bring back memories we sometimes hide far from others.
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A very well-written haiku. The early morning sounds are always the best and bring back memories we sometimes hide far from others.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Hello, my friend, :) Thank you for reading me.
Buddha blessings,
Gypsy Blue Rose
Haiku instructor
Member of the Haiku Society of America
a new haiku class every month....
Do you haiku? Check out the haiku club. It's a place for fun and learning.
Comment from Douglas Paul
Thank you so much, my friend. This is really good and I appreciate the tribute to our anniversary. Mary will love this too. You are such a sweetheart
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Thank you so much, my friend. This is really good and I appreciate the tribute to our anniversary. Mary will love this too. You are such a sweetheart
Comment Written 07-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Anything for my friends. :) Luv ya guys. I am glad you had a good day, sweetie pie. You both deserve it.
Gypsy