2017 JAPANESE POETRY
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "double haiku (magenta clouds)"A collection of Japanese poetry
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Comment from DR DIP
I get it I get it I love this double Haiku I love the background sound of the sea This is the sorta haiku I like.. obvious, non cryptic but has an emotion of the ocean
This one was obviously written tothe image it goes perfectly
thanks for sharing
dip
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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017
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I get it I get it I love this double Haiku I love the background sound of the sea This is the sorta haiku I like.. obvious, non cryptic but has an emotion of the ocean
This one was obviously written tothe image it goes perfectly
thanks for sharing
dip
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017
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LOL Dr Dip you made me smile. *joy sparks* your words make me happy :) thank you for your kind review.
Gypsy Blue Rose
Haiku Instructor
Haiku Society of America
Buddha Blessings
Comment from BOO ghost
The colors are like the rainbow. The feathers of a peacock. We must be welcoming spring. Two for one special. Boo is tickled by that... clever, the haiku below is the reflection. Think this is the first double haiku reflection theme I seen. You are on fire! Wow! This rocks. This should be a new type of haiku. You outdid yourself, Gypsy queen. Six stars
six stars
BOO!
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017
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The colors are like the rainbow. The feathers of a peacock. We must be welcoming spring. Two for one special. Boo is tickled by that... clever, the haiku below is the reflection. Think this is the first double haiku reflection theme I seen. You are on fire! Wow! This rocks. This should be a new type of haiku. You outdid yourself, Gypsy queen. Six stars
six stars
BOO!
Comment Written 07-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017
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Wow, Boo, thank you for the outstanding review and six stars. *joy sparks* your words make me happy :) thank you for your kind review.
Gypsy Blue Rose
Haiku Instructor
Haiku Society of America
Buddha Blessings
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Budda, haha. Anytime. BOO!
Comment from Sis Cat
Ah, Gypsy, this is a fine double haiku for a "two for one special." : )
It goes perfectly with your picture of a magenta sunset reflected in water. I love them!
Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017
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Ah, Gypsy, this is a fine double haiku for a "two for one special." : )
It goes perfectly with your picture of a magenta sunset reflected in water. I love them!
Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017
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*joy sparks* your words make me happy :) thank you for your kind review.
Gypsy Blue Rose
Haiku Instructor
Haiku Society of America
Buddha Blessings