Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "Dead Men Tell No Tales"a place to gather my poetic forms
32 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Smiles Luna,
this is a switch for you for you moon and love poems
Where did you learn pirates talk
I need not to say more, you had a well fun Double Etheree poem to read and review.
Gert
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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Smiles Luna,
this is a switch for you for you moon and love poems
Where did you learn pirates talk
I need not to say more, you had a well fun Double Etheree poem to read and review.
Gert
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Gert. I'm happy you liked the poem.
Best,
jeni
Comment from Irish Rain
Well, every gang has it's rules, ha ha. I guess if you're going to be a pirate, you'll be following theirs, or walking that plank, ha ha. A 'swashbuckling' poem Miss Jeni!! Blessings...
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Well, every gang has it's rules, ha ha. I guess if you're going to be a pirate, you'll be following theirs, or walking that plank, ha ha. A 'swashbuckling' poem Miss Jeni!! Blessings...
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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Hi, dear Irish Rain!
Yep, they have to follow the pirate code. I'm glad you found this a fun poem and thank you for your kind words of review.
Best,
jeni
Comment from Mastery
I loved this. You certainly have all ...and I mean all of the pirate jargon down pat, my friend. I had visions of watching Long John act up in Treasure Island as I read your wonderful poem. Bless you, Jeni. Bob
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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I loved this. You certainly have all ...and I mean all of the pirate jargon down pat, my friend. I had visions of watching Long John act up in Treasure Island as I read your wonderful poem. Bless you, Jeni. Bob
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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Oh, Bob, I'm so happy that you enjoyed this poem and that it gave you visions of Treasure Island. I consider that a high compliment. Thanks as always for reading and supporting my poetry efforts!
Yours,
jeni
Comment from Teri7
Jeni, This is a very cute pirate themed poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it my friend! Blessings, Teri
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Jeni, This is a very cute pirate themed poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it my friend! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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Thanks, Teri, I'm happy that you enjoyed this poem. I appreciate your read and review, my friend.
Best,
jeni
Comment from visionary1234
Oh such fun, this piece! I can almost see the blue twinkling lights as I ride thru Disneyland's 'Pirates of the Caribbean'! Great use of language and again, I see you've taken great pains with the visual presentation (though I KNOW I'm not supposed to comment on that! GRRR! Arrrgh!)
:)S
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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Oh such fun, this piece! I can almost see the blue twinkling lights as I ride thru Disneyland's 'Pirates of the Caribbean'! Great use of language and again, I see you've taken great pains with the visual presentation (though I KNOW I'm not supposed to comment on that! GRRR! Arrrgh!)
:)S
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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Dear :)S,
I'm glad that you thought that this was a fun read and got a visual from it. I didn't know that one wasn't supposed to make comments on presentations....hmmmmm. Thanks for your kind read and review.
Best,
luna
Comment from Dean Kuch
Ahoy, darlin'. 'Tis lovely wee lyrical verse be drippin' wit' shiver me timbers 'n sailin' th' plank. Th' way ye have presented it, what wit' th' sailin', flappin' jolly Ole Jolly Roger 'n all, be excellent. Well done!
~Wee Dean
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Ahoy, darlin'. 'Tis lovely wee lyrical verse be drippin' wit' shiver me timbers 'n sailin' th' plank. Th' way ye have presented it, what wit' th' sailin', flappin' jolly Ole Jolly Roger 'n all, be excellent. Well done!
~Wee Dean
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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Thank ye', bucko! I'm glad this met with your approval. I've got to talk to you again, maybe this afternoon if you've got the time?
me
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Ahoy, sister, I lust ye double etheree. It reminds me 'o ''band 'o pirates 'o th' Caribbean'' a ride in Disneyland that I lust. ye stunnin' presentation be a perfect match fer ye beautiful 'n unique poem. jolly ship, me bucko.
Gypsy Sensei
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Ahoy, sister, I lust ye double etheree. It reminds me 'o ''band 'o pirates 'o th' Caribbean'' a ride in Disneyland that I lust. ye stunnin' presentation be a perfect match fer ye beautiful 'n unique poem. jolly ship, me bucko.
Gypsy Sensei
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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Ahoy, Sister! I'm happy that you loved my double etheree and that it reminded you of something you enjoyed. Glad you liked the ship, as well.
Sister Luna
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
OH dear I love it. wow this is very well done and the count is spot on using all the pirate terms and characters. Wow, this is a great piece.
I spoke to mike and he said to contact him and he will walk you through it and welcome aboard matie
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OH dear I love it. wow this is very well done and the count is spot on using all the pirate terms and characters. Wow, this is a great piece.
I spoke to mike and he said to contact him and he will walk you through it and welcome aboard matie
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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Dear Barb,
I spoke to Mike and I'm all set. Thank you, matey! I appreciate your lovely review of my poem.
Love,
jeni
Comment from Pantygynt
Well shiver me timbers! Someone is here what speaks the pirate lingo. Heave away me hearties and hoist the jolly roger. A delightful piece of seafaring nonsense this, what copes syllabically so well with a poetic form one might suspect would be beyond the capabilities of yer average sea dog what can't count beyond eight. That's pieces of eight ye understand.
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Well shiver me timbers! Someone is here what speaks the pirate lingo. Heave away me hearties and hoist the jolly roger. A delightful piece of seafaring nonsense this, what copes syllabically so well with a poetic form one might suspect would be beyond the capabilities of yer average sea dog what can't count beyond eight. That's pieces of eight ye understand.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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Dear jim,
Yes, I understand. I'm so happy for this approving review and glad that you enjoyed the poem. Thanks so much.
Happy Monday,
jeni
Comment from winnona
A well-written Double Etheree poem. The words flowed well line to line combining easily forming the message of the poem for the reader. You have captured the spirit of the old pirate songs well.
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A well-written Double Etheree poem. The words flowed well line to line combining easily forming the message of the poem for the reader. You have captured the spirit of the old pirate songs well.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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Dear winnona,
I'm happy that you enjoyed the poem and I thank you for your lovely review.
Happy Monday,
jeni
