Comment from crybry67

Excellent

Yes change is quite a journey, some of us are not so happy to make. Where we are may be painful or just unsatisfying, but for whatever reason we feel unable or afraid to change things. Once we reach the point of truly desiring the transition, our metamorphosis can begin. Very well done... Christy

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017

Thank you, Christy.

I've heard it said that insanity is doing the same thing over and over again and expecting different results. When I get to that point, and my life is a total mess, I'm ready for change!

I appreciate your sensitive review, my friend.

Comment from closetpoetjester

Excellent

I just love these clarity poems and would love to see them somehow incorporated into a whole book of them.
They always seem to be quite profound and leave sage thoughts resonating with the reader.
This is no different. Inspiration provides an altered state of mind offering new opportunities and passions and a personal realisation that absolutely anything you put your mind to is possible.

LOVED this. WISH I had a sixer left but I think I may have hurled you one this week, not sure. Anyway, this is awesome and very thoughtfully constructed and delivered.

I was particularly taken with the closer. Awesome job mate!
Cheers P

PS You have some gobbledygook at the bottom of your notes. I think a cut and paste issue?

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017

Hey, P!

Thanks for the uplifting review, yes, you did toss me a sixer this week already, and I thank you. I'm really happy that you enjoyed this poem. Many people don't enjoy Clarity Poems for some reason, but I hadn't seen one done in years so I thought I give one a whirl. I was successful because I reached you with it.

Cheers back atcha

jeni

(let me look at the notes, thanks for the heads-up)

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

Hi Jeni

I like how you left the poem alone without an image. I like all the different types of poems you are writing. This one is presented with lovely text. I enjoyed reading it very much .

Well done
Mary

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017

Thank you, Mary, I appreciate your kind review. I like to experiment so I suppose it makes for a wide variety. Thank you for this kind review.

Always,

jeni

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

I like reading your poems because they vary so much in format and content. You are truly talented my friend!
Thanks for sharing!
Virtual sixer..
Blessings!
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017

Thanks, bekka, for the complimentary review and the virtual sixer! I appreciate them both, my friend.

love,

jeni *smile*

Comment from azwildrosa

Excellent

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I've read this one three time. A nice way to look a life. I am assuming it is about life. We change into something more desirable then before. I love how you didn't add a picture. It makes the reading think more about what this poem says. Thank you again for another great share. As always, it's been a pleasure to read another one of your works.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017

Thank you, azwildrosa, for your uplifting review. Yes, the poem is about life. I'm really glad you enjoyed it and I appreciate and am flattered by the complimentary wording.

Love,

jeni *smile*

Comment from jusylee72

Excellent

You sure know your poetry all the different types of poems you are writing. This one is a wonderful emmergence from sadness into life. I enjoyed reading it very much .
thank you

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017

Thank you, jusylee72,

I'm happy that you enjoyed this poem and thank you for your kind review.

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

This is a very interesting piece and another form I am not familiar with. This time I did dissect it and it was perfectly done. "Personal Metamorphisis" was an excellent line.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017

Thank you, Barb! I'm glad that you did a check-up on me...that's to keep me in line in case I screw up which I do often lol. I'm glad you didn't find any errors, though. Yes, I liked the "personal metamorphosis" line - I couldn't believe it came out to the right syllable count so I could use it!

Love,

Jeni *smile*

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

It's all about the focus, we will become, and attract, the essence of our focus. This is lovely, a 'personal metamorphosis' evolving from altered focus...blessings...

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017

Thanks for the kind and insightful review, dear Irish Rain! I do appreciate your read and review, as always!

love,

jeni

Comment from Lu Saluna

Excellent

This poem is very enlightening. In order for us to grow, there must be change, without change, no metamorphosis.
A lot of wisdom here, well done

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017

Thank you, Lu. I don't know about wisdom, but it's something that was put into my heart to write. I'm often just given words and I must use them.

Always,

jeni

Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy

Excellent

Great Piece! And so true. You seem to have a way with you, Luna. I am always impressed by the wisdom that comes from your poetic treasures. Welcome back and I hope to see more and more.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017

Thanks for the welcome back, Lil' Mormon Boy! I'm flattered by the complimentary review you just left me and I very much enjoyed reading it. I'm happy that you enjoyed my poem as well.


See you again soon,

jeni *smile*