Comment from Mary Wakeford

Excellent

My head was spinning after reading the complex requirement for this format, but I can speak to the charm of it. Delightful images and a whimsical read this Friday night.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017

Hi, Mary,

I'm sorry I included those convoluted author's notes, I should have just left them blank.

However, I thank you for telling me how you felt about the poem, I'm happy that you enjoyed it. I appreciate your review.

jeni

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

Far too much for my tired mind to grasp in terms of the form and the rules. All I know is that it is a delightful read and I enjoyed it thoroughly. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017

I'm glad that you enjoyed this one. Thanks for your kind words of review and your amazing support.

Love,

jeni

Comment from Bill O'Bier

Excellent

What does this mean? Is this something partially seen, The view obscured-- By something else....I love it. Thanks for sharing,,,
Bill~

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017

I'm sorry, Bill, I'll go in and check it. thanks for your kind words of review.

yours,

jeni

Comment from Mitchell Brontė

Excellent

Enjoyed this very much, thank you for the explanation of the structure it was very helpful.
Some wonderful lines and lovely artwork to accompany

Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017

Dear YNWA,

I very much appreciate your kind words of review. I'm happy that you enjoyed the poem and artwork. Thank you very much.

luna

Comment from Benny Beeharry

Excellent

Hi friend what a cute ,beautiful and exalting little writing. I would certainly read it again. Simple, fairy like the language flowing so smoothly .lovely piece of writing.
Danny Jock

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017

Hi again, Danny Jock!

I'm happy that you enjoyed this little poem of mine and that you'd read it more than once. I'm flattered by your kind words.

peace,

jeni

Comment from Louise Michelle

Excellent

This is quite magical and my only complaint is I would have liked to have seen a bit more. I read your notes and I can certainly appreciate the effort that went into this.

I love the sparkling image you chose and your words compliment it nicely. Also, I enjoyed the alliteration sprinkled about.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017

Dear Louise,

I think there's a one stanza limit to the form, but I could be wrong. I'll check, and if there is no stanza limitation, would be pleased to write a longer effort. Thanks for reading and enjoying my little poem.

peace,

jeni

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

This fun and trips neatly off the tongue. My only puzzlement is over the unecessarily complexity of the algebra. (x+2)-1 is the same as x+1 and (x+2)-2 is the same as x, so why not say so?

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017

Thanks for the kind words. I don't know, I hate it every time I copy that from Shadowpoetry. It's ridiculous. I hate math anyway and in no way could figure that out. I will cut that part out of the author's note next time.

peace,

jeni

reply by Pantygynt on 27-Jan-2017

I am no mathematician either but i have just enough to detect nonsense when I see it.

Comment from brenda bickers

Excellent

Hi Luna,
who doesn't believe in fairy's. What a delightful little poem. I don't think I have seen one like this before in this style. It sounds very complicated but reads beautifully.
I liked this a lot.
Brenda:))x

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017

Thank you, Brenda, I'm happy that you enjoyed this poem and thank you for your kind words.

peace,

jeni

Comment from crybry67

Excellent

This complex alliterisen is beautifully written, and I really like the artwork chosen to accompany your poem. I'm sure that now Mickey has gained his wings, he's right there singing and laughing with them. Blessings, Jeni... Christy

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017

Awww, Christy, I'm sure that Mickey is indeed with them. I like to think like that. Thank you for the nice thought. I appreciate the kind review.

Love,

jeni

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

Hi Jeni,
This is a beautiful poem dedicated to your son. It has wonderful imagery. I love the whole poem

A dozen demure fairies flying
'round moon most misty nights, singing and laughing.
All alight on a fair flower,
Some sit for hours happily daydreaming,
listening lightly to wild wind.
You yearn to meet the fae folk this night ~
Shhhh! Sleep soundly now and dream deeply

Beautiful
Mary

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017

Thank you Mary, you are very kind. *smile*

jeni