Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "Dreamwalking"a place to gather my poetic forms
36 total reviews
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
what a stunning and amazing write. This is remarkably good, you really held my interest with your beautiful imagery, you have been working hard Jeni, I adore this very good work kind regards, Meia :)
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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what a stunning and amazing write. This is remarkably good, you really held my interest with your beautiful imagery, you have been working hard Jeni, I adore this very good work kind regards, Meia :)
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Meia, I'm happy that you enjoyed this. Writing is not work for me, as I'm sure it isn't for you either; it is a creative outlet which I have to acknowledge at least once daily.
Love you,
jeni
Comment from Janet Foor
They say we all dream - I rarely remember my dreams but when I do, they are vivid and real. One time, I dreamed that my husband was having an affair with a soap opera star. It was so real, I didn't speak to him for three days. haha
This lovely poem has a very mystic feel. (dreamlike) I loved the vivid imagery and rhyming couplets.
Well done,
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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They say we all dream - I rarely remember my dreams but when I do, they are vivid and real. One time, I dreamed that my husband was having an affair with a soap opera star. It was so real, I didn't speak to him for three days. haha
This lovely poem has a very mystic feel. (dreamlike) I loved the vivid imagery and rhyming couplets.
Well done,
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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lol that's really funny, you didn't speak to him for three whole days! I'm glad that you liked this poem and thank you for your kind and funny review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
To see the moon and rising sun and nature at it's best makes one richer than any monetary reward, your poem took me to another place where dreams are made, regard, Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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To see the moon and rising sun and nature at it's best makes one richer than any monetary reward, your poem took me to another place where dreams are made, regard, Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much, Dolly. I'm glad you told me that. I appreciate the gracious review.
Comment from ProSongwriter
Hi Jeni,
This is terrific. I have been fascinated by dreams since I was a teenager. I'll be 70 in March.
I found this to be uplifting, curious and so well written. Loved your opening lines ... attention grabbers first thing.
Great job! Hugs,
Alan
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Hi Jeni,
This is terrific. I have been fascinated by dreams since I was a teenager. I'll be 70 in March.
I found this to be uplifting, curious and so well written. Loved your opening lines ... attention grabbers first thing.
Great job! Hugs,
Alan
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Hey Alan, I'm almost on the same plane as you. My husband is 64, 65 in March. I'm happy that you enjoyed this poem, expecially the opening lines. Thanks for continuing to support my work.
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It was, indeed, very nice. My pleasure
Comment from mbroyles2
This is lovely.
The rhymes are outstanding.
"When walking in your lunar dreams, nothing is really as it seems."
Great opening!
A joy to read.
Michael
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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This is lovely.
The rhymes are outstanding.
"When walking in your lunar dreams, nothing is really as it seems."
Great opening!
A joy to read.
Michael
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Dear Michael, I'm so happy that you liked the opening to this poem. I thank you for the gracious review.
Comment from DR DIP
Dreaming. We all do it. Some dreams are vivid and you wake up disappointed they are not real. This is well written in AABB rhyme scheme which creates a good rhythm
thanks for sharing
dip
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Dreaming. We all do it. Some dreams are vivid and you wake up disappointed they are not real. This is well written in AABB rhyme scheme which creates a good rhythm
thanks for sharing
dip
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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thank you, dip, for reading my poem and the kind review accompanying it. I'm happy that you continue to support my work.
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my pleasure
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Oh wow this is like a song. The flow is absolutely wonderful as I read it. Especially the last stanza. I love the wording and the flow is magnificient. That was the best part
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Oh wow this is like a song. The flow is absolutely wonderful as I read it. Especially the last stanza. I love the wording and the flow is magnificient. That was the best part
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Barb. I appreciate your continuing support of my work and this review.
Comment from rspoet
This is quite a poem with the revealing line
"nothing is really as it seems"
walking in a lunar dream
The swap reversals work nicely
down from the moonbeam to rise in the morning
Excellent art work to match poem
Nicely done
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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This is quite a poem with the revealing line
"nothing is really as it seems"
walking in a lunar dream
The swap reversals work nicely
down from the moonbeam to rise in the morning
Excellent art work to match poem
Nicely done
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you very much for your read and gracious review. I appreciate it.
Comment from closetpoetjester
Ahh a delightful walk and rise with ease through your lunar dreams and I enjoyed the swap back and forth between the cleverly constructed refrains. Not always easy to find a twin phrase you can split down the middle and that works in reverse.
I very much enjoyed this read. Nicely written and it flowed with a solid rhythm. Also, some well positioned enjambment. Overall a terrific poem
Cheers P
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Ahh a delightful walk and rise with ease through your lunar dreams and I enjoyed the swap back and forth between the cleverly constructed refrains. Not always easy to find a twin phrase you can split down the middle and that works in reverse.
I very much enjoyed this read. Nicely written and it flowed with a solid rhythm. Also, some well positioned enjambment. Overall a terrific poem
Cheers P
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Dear P, I thank you for your read and your gracious review. Take good care.
Comment from GWinterwin
Good poem with a good picture, also good word flow, and rhyming to make it easy to read. I guess walking on the moon is sort of like dreaming as the person becomes light, and floats in mid -air which is what seems to happen in dreams.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Good poem with a good picture, also good word flow, and rhyming to make it easy to read. I guess walking on the moon is sort of like dreaming as the person becomes light, and floats in mid -air which is what seems to happen in dreams.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate you reading my poem very much.
