Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Too Much Nonsense"a place to gather my poetic forms
36 total reviews
Comment from Jackarrie
HI,
This is a difficult format to write, yet you wrote a very clever and imaginative poem. The flow and the alliteration is well done. I love the artwork and also the title.
Mary
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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HI,
This is a difficult format to write, yet you wrote a very clever and imaginative poem. The flow and the alliteration is well done. I love the artwork and also the title.
Mary
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Thank you Mary, I greatly appreciate your gracious review.
love and light,
jeni
Comment from DR DIP
So glad I read your author's notes Luna.
I read the poem before I read the author's notes
Now I see and appreciate the parameters you worked in to write this
thanks for sharing
dip
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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So glad I read your author's notes Luna.
I read the poem before I read the author's notes
Now I see and appreciate the parameters you worked in to write this
thanks for sharing
dip
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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I'm glad you read the notes as well, dip, so that you could see the parameters of the form. Thanks for this review.
love and light,
jeni
Comment from Lu Saluna
a challenging piece of writing you pulled off very excellently. I like the magical theme, it is very enchanting and entertaining. I enjoy this poetry form, it is a lovely form and you have mastered it well. Great job.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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a challenging piece of writing you pulled off very excellently. I like the magical theme, it is very enchanting and entertaining. I enjoy this poetry form, it is a lovely form and you have mastered it well. Great job.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Lu, I appreciate your gracious review. Have a great day!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written alliterisen. An interesting format and topic. The alliteration works perfectly in every line. A white wedding instead of a black wedding.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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A very well-written alliterisen. An interesting format and topic. The alliteration works perfectly in every line. A white wedding instead of a black wedding.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Thank you Sandra. I always appreciate it when you take the time to read and review my work. Have a great day!
love and light,
jeni
Comment from DonandVicki
A very clever and imaginative poem. I like the flow and the alliteration of your work. The artwork is enchanting and complements your poem beautifully. Very well done.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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A very clever and imaginative poem. I like the flow and the alliteration of your work. The artwork is enchanting and complements your poem beautifully. Very well done.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Thanks so much for the courteous review. I'm pleased that you enjoyed the work. Have a great day!
love and light,
jeni
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Now I understand alliteration, after all these years you have taught me something today. Kinda like a tongue twister but phrased beautifully instead.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Now I understand alliteration, after all these years you have taught me something today. Kinda like a tongue twister but phrased beautifully instead.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Bingo, Barb! Now I'll be waiting to see one of these from your pen. Thanks for the review.
love and light,
jeni
Comment from nomi338
Your expertly clever use of language creates a whimsical world where one's imagination is allowed to run wild. Wonderful use of words.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Your expertly clever use of language creates a whimsical world where one's imagination is allowed to run wild. Wonderful use of words.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Thank you nomi. I always appreciate it when you take the time to read and review my work. Have a great day!
love and light,
jeni
Comment from GWinterwin
Good poem about too much nonsense. Thoughts about mother moon, fairies, snow bunnies, pixies wanting to play pogo, and fair maidens and their wedding. Good job, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Good poem about too much nonsense. Thoughts about mother moon, fairies, snow bunnies, pixies wanting to play pogo, and fair maidens and their wedding. Good job, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Thank you. I always appreciate it when you take the time to read and review my work. Have a great day!
love and light,
jeni
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Luna, I read and reread your poem to absorb the wonderments of your excellent poem. Seven lines with your complex alliterations looks very challenging to compose a very poignant poem. I truly enjoyed this and congratulate you with this piece of poetry. Well done my friend,,,,,,,Jim
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Luna, I read and reread your poem to absorb the wonderments of your excellent poem. Seven lines with your complex alliterations looks very challenging to compose a very poignant poem. I truly enjoyed this and congratulate you with this piece of poetry. Well done my friend,,,,,,,Jim
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the courteous and flattering review, Jim, I'm truly happy that you found this a well-written poem.
Have a great day,
jeni
Comment from Sis Cat
Wow, a complex poem filled with surreal, dreamlike imagery of pixies and fair maidens preparing for a white wedding. I love the fun and playfulness of this poem. This line "pixies playing pogo" is superb. While I am unaccustomed to this poetry form, I nevertheless enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Wow, a complex poem filled with surreal, dreamlike imagery of pixies and fair maidens preparing for a white wedding. I love the fun and playfulness of this poem. This line "pixies playing pogo" is superb. While I am unaccustomed to this poetry form, I nevertheless enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Thank you Sis Cat. I always appreciate it when you take the time to read and review my work. Have a great day!
love and light,
jeni
