The Magic Bumbershoot
a child's fantasy15 total reviews
Comment from Heidi M
I love the word bumbershoot, which I have never heard before. It adds to the delight of the story you tell in this poem. There could be a lot of wonderful adventures for a child who owns a magic bumbershoot!
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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I love the word bumbershoot, which I have never heard before. It adds to the delight of the story you tell in this poem. There could be a lot of wonderful adventures for a child who owns a magic bumbershoot!
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Good for you! That's a great idea! Hadn't thought of that! Thank you!
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thank you ! That is a great idea! I hadn't thought of doing that. I just tried to nominate you for good reviewer, but it said I already had my quota. I'm really sorry because your suggestion IS a big help. Anyway, thanks again!
Katharine - pome lover
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How thoughtful of you. Thanks for the virtual nomination!
Comment from winnona
A very well-written poem. Your magical words flowed line to line and combined easily forming the story in your poem. It is imaginative, creative and a just plain wonderful child poem.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2017
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A very well-written poem. Your magical words flowed line to line and combined easily forming the story in your poem. It is imaginative, creative and a just plain wonderful child poem.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2017
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thank you very much!
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
This is an excellent addition to the share a story in a poem contest. It is a cute piece to read and an excellent story for children as well as those of us going through their second childhood.lol Perfect rhyme and flow
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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2017
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This is an excellent addition to the share a story in a poem contest. It is a cute piece to read and an excellent story for children as well as those of us going through their second childhood.lol Perfect rhyme and flow
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Comment Written 19-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2017
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thanks, Barb. Appreciate it muchly!
Comment from c_lucas
A very well written story for children With a very good ending. Your post has a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2017
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A very well written story for children With a very good ending. Your post has a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind words and the 6! It's a honor!
Katharine - pome lover
Comment from robyn corum
Pome Lover,
This was such fun! For a brief moment, I was back to reading the poems of adewpearl and all her fun children's escapades! *smile* What a treat! Thanks!
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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2017
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Pome Lover,
This was such fun! For a brief moment, I was back to reading the poems of adewpearl and all her fun children's escapades! *smile* What a treat! Thanks!
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Comment Written 19-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2017
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thank you, Robyn. Glad you enjoyed it.