Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "The Juggler"a place to gather my poetic forms
27 total reviews
Comment from azwildrosa
What a great read. Your poems flows nicely creating a nice picture of this clown. Your rhyme flows well. Nothing seems forced.Thank you for sharing this lively poem. It was a pleasure to read.
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What a great read. Your poems flows nicely creating a nice picture of this clown. Your rhyme flows well. Nothing seems forced.Thank you for sharing this lively poem. It was a pleasure to read.
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Thanks so much! I appreciate your review.
jeni
Comment from Sis Cat
This is a fun poem. I imagined the dream of a juggling clown who caused "a smile replaced my daytime cry." Poem has a touch of the old comic strip Little Nemo in Slumberland. the boy was always awakening from fantastic dreams. Thank you for sharing your smooth, fun, and well-rhymed Rispetto.
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This is a fun poem. I imagined the dream of a juggling clown who caused "a smile replaced my daytime cry." Poem has a touch of the old comic strip Little Nemo in Slumberland. the boy was always awakening from fantastic dreams. Thank you for sharing your smooth, fun, and well-rhymed Rispetto.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
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Thanks! I'm happy that you enjoyed this, Sis Cat. Thanks for your kind review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Great rhymes, lovely flow, great light hearted dreaming of a clown juggling! Short but entertaining clever write, love Dolly x
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Great rhymes, lovely flow, great light hearted dreaming of a clown juggling! Short but entertaining clever write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
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Thanks, Dolly! I appreciate your kind review.
jeni
Comment from mermaids
Your words are smooth and I admire your rhyming of words. You did well with this form which is not an easy form to create. I like how the first verse is a dream and then you are awake. You tell a story in poetic form.
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Your words are smooth and I admire your rhyming of words. You did well with this form which is not an easy form to create. I like how the first verse is a dream and then you are awake. You tell a story in poetic form.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
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Thank you, mermaids. I'm glad that you enjoyed and thank you for your review.
jeni
Comment from Craigitar
I enjoyed this a lot. You've captured the disjointedness of a dream. Your Rispetto, a form I'm not too familiar with, flowed and rhymed perfectly. Good job.
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I enjoyed this a lot. You've captured the disjointedness of a dream. Your Rispetto, a form I'm not too familiar with, flowed and rhymed perfectly. Good job.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
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Thanks for the kind review. I appreciate it!
luna
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Very nice! I like your rispetto, Luna. It's well written with fine rhyme quatrains and iambic tetrameter. Well done my friend!
Gypsy
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Very nice! I like your rispetto, Luna. It's well written with fine rhyme quatrains and iambic tetrameter. Well done my friend!
Gypsy
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Gypsy! I'm glad that you enjoyed and thank you for your review.
jeni
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Except for those afraid of clowns, this is a cute piece. I read it to my grandson that has many problems and he memorized it in three minutes. That is one of his advantages of his problems.
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Except for those afraid of clowns, this is a cute piece. I read it to my grandson that has many problems and he memorized it in three minutes. That is one of his advantages of his problems.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
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Oh, wow, I'm sorry that he has problems Barb and I can imagine what one of them might be. That's incredible that he memorized it in three minutes. I'm amazed and send my love.
jeni
Comment from Lu Saluna
This is a fun poem telling the story of a dream to cheer one up. The rhyme and meter are very good, spot on. The poem flows very well and is a very enjoyable read.
This is the first Rispetto I have read, thank you for the information. There are so many poetry forms. Thank you for introducing me to this one.
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This is a fun poem telling the story of a dream to cheer one up. The rhyme and meter are very good, spot on. The poem flows very well and is a very enjoyable read.
This is the first Rispetto I have read, thank you for the information. There are so many poetry forms. Thank you for introducing me to this one.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
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Thank YOU for your kind read and review. If I've introduced you to a new form of poetry, then I am happy.
jeni
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Rispetto. Your clown theme works well. The rhyming is great. It has an element of fun and humour right through, that makes it a lighthearted and uplifting poem.
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A very well-written Rispetto. Your clown theme works well. The rhyming is great. It has an element of fun and humour right through, that makes it a lighthearted and uplifting poem.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
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Dear Sandra, I'm glad that you enjoyed and thank you for your review.
jeni
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
A wonderful Rispetto, underpinned, as all Clowns are, with a haunting sadness. Obviously I know about your son and he will always be with you, until you meet again, I hope by creating beautiful work like this you feel some sort of peace, your work is always amazing an this is no exception, well done kindest regards, Meia :)
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A wonderful Rispetto, underpinned, as all Clowns are, with a haunting sadness. Obviously I know about your son and he will always be with you, until you meet again, I hope by creating beautiful work like this you feel some sort of peace, your work is always amazing an this is no exception, well done kindest regards, Meia :)
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
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Meia, thank you for such a lovely review. I'm happy you enjoyed this and thank you for mentioning Mickey.
jeni
