Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Man in the Moon"a place to gather my poetic forms
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Comment from winnona
thais is a beautifully written Rondeau poem. The words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. The words form the most wonderful wimsical images in my mind as I read this.
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thais is a beautifully written Rondeau poem. The words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. The words form the most wonderful wimsical images in my mind as I read this.
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Thanks! A Six-Star review, winnona I'm honored. I'm happy that you enjoyed this so much as to give it the sixth star. I'm honored, once again.
jeni
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Oh, such a beautiful and moving poem about the man in the moon. You play with our imaginations as you share yours. I can see the moon shining down upon the fairies below.
Great job,
Rhonda
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Oh, such a beautiful and moving poem about the man in the moon. You play with our imaginations as you share yours. I can see the moon shining down upon the fairies below.
Great job,
Rhonda
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Thanks!
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Jeni. I must tell you, I have not seen many of these types of poetry before. You are evidently a scholar of the art in every way. I like the easy-going flow of this piece. Bravo! Bob ps. We seem to take the moon for granted, huh?
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Hi, Jeni. I must tell you, I have not seen many of these types of poetry before. You are evidently a scholar of the art in every way. I like the easy-going flow of this piece. Bravo! Bob ps. We seem to take the moon for granted, huh?
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Dear Bob, yes I think the moon is taken for granted in many instances! Thanks for the kind review. I appreciate it and your attention to my work.
jeni
Comment from robina1978
A lovely picture of a face in the moon, and dedicated to your son, Mickey, who is so missed. You fulfilled all the requirements of a Rondeau. One comment: It looks like your second line is somewhat forced for the rhyme. No offence meant.
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A lovely picture of a face in the moon, and dedicated to your son, Mickey, who is so missed. You fulfilled all the requirements of a Rondeau. One comment: It looks like your second line is somewhat forced for the rhyme. No offence meant.
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No offense taken at all. I appreciate your honesty. Thanks for the kind review. I appreciate it and your attention to my work.
jeni
Comment from Bill Schott
This rondeau, Man In The Moon, is a really nice personification of that brilliant ball the bathes us in reflected light and captures or imagination even now.
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This rondeau, Man In The Moon, is a really nice personification of that brilliant ball the bathes us in reflected light and captures or imagination even now.
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Bill, Thanks for the kind review. I appreciate it and your attention to my work.
jeni
Comment from William Ross
Nicely done on the rondeau and the man in the moon. good rhyming and rhythm with a good meter.Thanks for the share and have a great day
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Nicely done on the rondeau and the man in the moon. good rhyming and rhythm with a good meter.Thanks for the share and have a great day
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Bill, Thanks for the kind review. I appreciate it and your attention to my work.
jeni
Comment from Sis Cat
Ooh, this is a smooth and evocative Rondeau. I love your dreamlike musings of the Man in the Moon. You call up an enchanting vision of nocturnal fairies and a wolverine queen. Your poem is very magical in the way it appeals to my heart and to my imagination. Your language is exquisite:
"For travelers you light, pristine,
a pathway to the Evergreens ~
gathering places of delight."
I would not change a word of this poem. My only regret is that I do not have any sixes left to give it, because your poem and craft are exceptional and deserving of attention and accolades.
Thank you for sharing.
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Ooh, this is a smooth and evocative Rondeau. I love your dreamlike musings of the Man in the Moon. You call up an enchanting vision of nocturnal fairies and a wolverine queen. Your poem is very magical in the way it appeals to my heart and to my imagination. Your language is exquisite:
"For travelers you light, pristine,
a pathway to the Evergreens ~
gathering places of delight."
I would not change a word of this poem. My only regret is that I do not have any sixes left to give it, because your poem and craft are exceptional and deserving of attention and accolades.
Thank you for sharing.
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Dear Sis Cat, Thanks for the kind review. I appreciate it and your attention to my work.
jeni
Comment from Lu Saluna
Such a pretty poem, it has almost a musical quality to it. Very enchanting with great imagery and magical. A moonlit walk through the evergreens. How gorgeous is that?
This poem strikes me as mythical and whimsical. Very well done.
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Such a pretty poem, it has almost a musical quality to it. Very enchanting with great imagery and magical. A moonlit walk through the evergreens. How gorgeous is that?
This poem strikes me as mythical and whimsical. Very well done.
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Thanks for the kind review. I appreciate it and your attention to my work.
jeni
Comment from amada
I like the repetition of Man in the Moon...A great and touching Rondeau, dedicated, maybe to your son, Kenny. I know, I know, I lost a grandson that age...I look at the sky a lot, trying to find him.
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I like the repetition of Man in the Moon...A great and touching Rondeau, dedicated, maybe to your son, Kenny. I know, I know, I lost a grandson that age...I look at the sky a lot, trying to find him.
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Thanks for the kind review. I appreciate it and your attention to my work.
jeni
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Rondeau. The man in the moon was away for a long time then he suddenly comes back. The moon has a great co.forting presence when we feel alone at night.
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A very well-written Rondeau. The man in the moon was away for a long time then he suddenly comes back. The moon has a great co.forting presence when we feel alone at night.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2017
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Thanks for the kind review. I appreciate it and your attention to my work.
jeni
