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marinadawn
This made me smile remembering as a child the many tricks my brothers employed and got me in trouble, it captures that feel perfectly of innocent fun
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Comment Written 08-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2017
Thank you, marinadawn, for the nice review. Bill
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