Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Imagination"a place to gather my poetic forms
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Comment from nancyrabbrose
Well done. I enjoy your palindromes. The illustration is well chosen. Your choice of words is amazing. Certainly the word "imagination" fits your poem. It reads quite smoothly.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
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Well done. I enjoy your palindromes. The illustration is well chosen. Your choice of words is amazing. Certainly the word "imagination" fits your poem. It reads quite smoothly.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much!
Comment from rjuselius
this is a brilliant palindrome to me at least dear jeni! as i have previously pointed out, i love mythical poems and having written two palindromes, i know how hard they are.
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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this is a brilliant palindrome to me at least dear jeni! as i have previously pointed out, i love mythical poems and having written two palindromes, i know how hard they are.
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 09-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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/dear rebekka, I'm honored by the six-star review that you saw fit to place on this palindrome. Yes, they are indeed hard to write, but aren't they rewarding?
Thank you once again, my friend! I'm very grateful.
love and light,
jeni
Comment from Ella25
Fairy palindromes in the moonlight sprinkled with gleaming dust and poetical words. How lovely presented and pleasurable to recite. The image reflects the words. Excellent work, my friend. Blessings, Ella
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Fairy palindromes in the moonlight sprinkled with gleaming dust and poetical words. How lovely presented and pleasurable to recite. The image reflects the words. Excellent work, my friend. Blessings, Ella
Comment Written 08-Jan-2017
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Luna: you have a great imagination. Love the alliteration and the words
flow smoothly both ways. In Dallas, the symbol of the city is Pegasus, a red
Pegasus flies over the buildings. Yes, angels joyous singing while people dance and
dreamers dream. Keep writing which is good therapy. You have stories and poems to write. Grief is hard, my friend is still mourning. Treasure the memories and know Mikey was and is loved. Happy New Year! flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Luna: you have a great imagination. Love the alliteration and the words
flow smoothly both ways. In Dallas, the symbol of the city is Pegasus, a red
Pegasus flies over the buildings. Yes, angels joyous singing while people dance and
dreamers dream. Keep writing which is good therapy. You have stories and poems to write. Grief is hard, my friend is still mourning. Treasure the memories and know Mikey was and is loved. Happy New Year! flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 08-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Dear flylikeaneagle,
I am so flattered by this six-star review, I just can't tell you. Thank you for the gracious and flattering review.
Once again, Im honored and grateful for this review. All my best.
light and love,
jeni
Comment from Lu Saluna
This is extremely creative. Very vivid imagery and I can't believe how well done this is. I find this form extremely intimidating and you have made it look so easy.
Well done. It is so full of fantasy and very enchanting. I love your selection of art.
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This is extremely creative. Very vivid imagery and I can't believe how well done this is. I find this form extremely intimidating and you have made it look so easy.
Well done. It is so full of fantasy and very enchanting. I love your selection of art.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2017
Comment from Dean Kuch
Great alliteration is sprinkled sparingly all throughout your wonderfully well-written palindrome here, Jeni.
Prancing faeries, wily wizards, dancing dragons, and ominous ogres. Okay, there really weren't any dancing dragons or ominous ogres in yours, I'll admit.
But it sounds good, LOL.
Our imaginations can transport us to magical new worlds, worlds beyond the possibilities of logic or reason.
But, oh, what wonderful places those are.
Bravo,
~Dean
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Great alliteration is sprinkled sparingly all throughout your wonderfully well-written palindrome here, Jeni.
Prancing faeries, wily wizards, dancing dragons, and ominous ogres. Okay, there really weren't any dancing dragons or ominous ogres in yours, I'll admit.
But it sounds good, LOL.
Our imaginations can transport us to magical new worlds, worlds beyond the possibilities of logic or reason.
But, oh, what wonderful places those are.
Bravo,
~Dean
Comment Written 08-Jan-2017
Comment from Margaret Ford
I've never tried one of these. Just thinking about it scares me.
Anyway, I like this one: the idea of it, the way it's constructed, the beautiful phrases. You're setting a good example for those of us too lazy or cowardly (that's me) or talentless to try.
So thanks. :) Margaret
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I've never tried one of these. Just thinking about it scares me.
Anyway, I like this one: the idea of it, the way it's constructed, the beautiful phrases. You're setting a good example for those of us too lazy or cowardly (that's me) or talentless to try.
So thanks. :) Margaret
Comment Written 08-Jan-2017
Comment from kiwisteveh
You must have found the knack for palindromes, which to me are a torture.
Your poem is full of fantastical creatures, and the message seems to be tht many of the restrictions we place on ourselves as writers, are removed if we venture into the realm of fantasy. I find the same freedom when I dive into nonsense verse.
Steve
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You must have found the knack for palindromes, which to me are a torture.
Your poem is full of fantastical creatures, and the message seems to be tht many of the restrictions we place on ourselves as writers, are removed if we venture into the realm of fantasy. I find the same freedom when I dive into nonsense verse.
Steve
Comment Written 08-Jan-2017
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Jeni I wish I could give you sixes for almost all of your poems. they are good...one right after the other. You are so talented, my friend.
"Pegasus prancing,
angels' joyous singing,
dust-sprinkling fairies flying,
warily wandering wizards."
Bravo! Blessings, Bob
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Hi, Jeni I wish I could give you sixes for almost all of your poems. they are good...one right after the other. You are so talented, my friend.
"Pegasus prancing,
angels' joyous singing,
dust-sprinkling fairies flying,
warily wandering wizards."
Bravo! Blessings, Bob
Comment Written 08-Jan-2017
Comment from MsPetra
I found this offering to be light hearted and uplifting. Thank you for writing it. I like what you did with your presentation. You really nailed it with the second stanza.
Please keep writing. I am looking forward to reading more of your work.
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I found this offering to be light hearted and uplifting. Thank you for writing it. I like what you did with your presentation. You really nailed it with the second stanza.
Please keep writing. I am looking forward to reading more of your work.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2017
