Comment from robina1978

Excellent

An excellent artwork that complements your poem perfectly. You stuck to the form of the poem, a Palindrome. I find that hard to do. Well done.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2017

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

You should have entered this in the contest as it is stunning! It meets the rules of form beautifully by being poetically brilliant read both forwards and backwards. I wonderfully magical read filled with mystical imagery. Well done and I thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2017

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

NIcely done palendrome poem about one of my favorite topics, those that live in fantasy. I choose to believe I will see them in heaven if I make it there.

The artwork is very bright and I love the fairies. It seems like the poem is written for the picture.

Keep writing

Joan

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017

Dear Joan, I agree with you that heaven will be awesome. I think we'll all make it there, because I have lived my hell on earth, believe me. That's just my own belief.

I'm glad that you liked the artwork and the fairies. Actually the poem was written first, but I was thrilled to find the art.

Thanks again, my friend.

reply by dragonpoet on 06-Jan-2017

You're welcome. You are so lucky to find such a perfect fit. Whenever I look for artwork, I can never find anything I think fits. So I don't use it. I hope we all make it.


Joan

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

The very essence of childhood dreams, no matter which way you look at it! What a delightful poem and how well you have maintained the sense in both directions. Not an easy task!

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017

Thank you so much! This was one of the most enjoyable palindromes that i have written, I had a lot of fun coming up with the right words. Thanks for reading it and for the kind review.

Always,

Luna

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Jeni, This is a very interesting poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017

Thank you, Teri, I'm happy that you enjoyed my poem, friend. Thanks for the kind review.

Always,

Jeni

Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Excellent

"Dream Play" is an extremely well-written piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. KEEP WRITING! and I'll keep reading.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017

Dear Duchess, I love it when I get a review from you. Thank you for your kind words, and I will indeed keep writing.

Always,

Luna

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 07-Jan-2017

Luna, it's always a delight to both read and review your work.

Best wishes, the Duchess

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 07-Jan-2017

Luna, it's always a delight to both read and review your work.

Best wishes, the Duchess

Comment from Leineco

Excellent

Excellent handling of this difficult form Luna. . .full of eye catching,
mind engaging imagery and carefully plotted to ensure smooth
reading forward and back :-)

Very nicely done :-)

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017

Dear Leineco,

I appreciate that you took the time to read and review this poem. It was actually the most fun to write of all the poems of this type I've written so far. I'm happy you enjoyed it and received some imagery from your read.

Always,

Luna

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Dreampay is a lovely palindrome complete with a dreamy picture of fairies and elves. Whimsical and fun. Very nicely done Jeni.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017

Dear Janet,

Thanks for taking the time to read this poem and to leave this kind review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Always,

Jeni

Comment from Fridayauthor

Excellent

Ah, the dreams of the young! So nice to have life so simple and yet told so well in a complicated rhyming pattern.

Very well done indeed. Even the image enhances the posting.

Sing and giggle tells it all!

Thank you!

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017

Ha, ha, ha! I'm glad you liked "sing and giggle." Yes, to have the dreams of the young once again.

Actually, out of all the palindromes I've written, this was the most enjoyable to prepare.

Thanks so much for your read and kind review.

Always,

Jeni

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

Oh, Luna...a report style, but beautiful in thought...light in delivery and joyous in its reception.
It is as if there were butterflies flickering and frolicking to take the pain away.
I felt you should have saved a lot of your poems for the new year for first are you ranked after six poems, and you used so many, and promoted high. I hope you have some left. I never enter that race, it takes me a while to produce as the way with audio as well routine.

Good luck.
Here's to Mickey...I share a little of your feel.
My best wishes.
RG

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017

Dear RG,

Thanks for your comment about Mickey. His two year death anniversary is this coming Sunday, three days from now. If we can just get through that day, then there's another year to adjust to our new normal without him. Thanks for letting me know that you share some of my feel.

To change the subject, I thank you for reading and reviewing my work. Your comments are very kind.

Yes, I have some poems left, however, much of my writing is written, revised and polished just before posting. I listen to some music and let my mind go...and the words seem to flow, for better or worse!

Always,

Jeni

reply by RGstar on 06-Jan-2017

Good on you, Jeni. Pleasure knowing you.
Best wishes