2017 JAPANESE POETRY
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Guiding Light"A collection of Japanese poetry
15 total reviews
Comment from Lu Saluna
a wonderful image, a sea of golden yellow. Ripe barley is beautiful, "beacon in the darkness" all that golden colour would rival the sun any day.
Beautiful haiku, wonderful graphic to go with it.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017
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a wonderful image, a sea of golden yellow. Ripe barley is beautiful, "beacon in the darkness" all that golden colour would rival the sun any day.
Beautiful haiku, wonderful graphic to go with it.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017
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Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind words. I am always happy to see you 'round these parts.
Gypsy Hugs
Comment from ciliverde
Nice job on this, Gypsy. I like your presentation very much, and your Haiku itself is stunning. It paints a vivid picture of sunlight beaming through clouds on a field of barley - and the way a scene like that can sometimes just stop us in our tracks.
I'm glad you're doing this challenge, I think we will all learn a lot!
Carol
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017
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Nice job on this, Gypsy. I like your presentation very much, and your Haiku itself is stunning. It paints a vivid picture of sunlight beaming through clouds on a field of barley - and the way a scene like that can sometimes just stop us in our tracks.
I'm glad you're doing this challenge, I think we will all learn a lot!
Carol
Comment Written 02-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017
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Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind words. I am always happy to see you 'round these parts.
Gypsy Hugs
Comment from mbagby23
Picture perfect type of poem. This is a winner to me. I love how the sun cracks the sky. shading light on all this darkness. Well written.
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Picture perfect type of poem. This is a winner to me. I love how the sun cracks the sky. shading light on all this darkness. Well written.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017
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Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind words. I am always happy to see you 'round these parts.
Gypsy Hugs
Comment from LanceHill
Gypsy,
This is a great description of a beautiful picture. It is a perfect example of how we should live. Seeking the light and beauty in everything. Thank you for sharing. Have a blessed day and a Happy New Year. God bless.
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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017
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Gypsy,
This is a great description of a beautiful picture. It is a perfect example of how we should live. Seeking the light and beauty in everything. Thank you for sharing. Have a blessed day and a Happy New Year. God bless.
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Comment Written 01-Jan-2017
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Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind words. I am always happy to see you 'round these parts. Happy New Year to you too, my friend.
Gypsy Hugs
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
A very well written traditional haiku. I've wondered where barley came from. Now I know. I'm looking forward to the haiku club. Happy New Year, my friend~Debbie
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A very well written traditional haiku. I've wondered where barley came from. Now I know. I'm looking forward to the haiku club. Happy New Year, my friend~Debbie
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Comment Written 01-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend. I am grateful for your time and I value your expert opinion.
Gypsy
