2017 JAPANESE POETRY
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Blood is Thicker than Water"A collection of Japanese poetry
22 total reviews
Comment from winnona
Beautiful poem. The words combined easily forming the message of the poem for the reader. The music captures you and you can almost see the woman in the painting come alive dancing in a great hall or in front of a fire in a camp at night under the stars.
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Beautiful poem. The words combined easily forming the message of the poem for the reader. The music captures you and you can almost see the woman in the painting come alive dancing in a great hall or in front of a fire in a camp at night under the stars.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend. I am grateful for your time and I value your expert opinion.
Gypsy
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
OH so true, When I think of Spanish pieces, I think of the dance and the fervor that is so hot blooded and so passionate. This is an excellent haiku as I expect from you. I don't review many haiku, but since you have that class and club, I have read many I could not pass by
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OH so true, When I think of Spanish pieces, I think of the dance and the fervor that is so hot blooded and so passionate. This is an excellent haiku as I expect from you. I don't review many haiku, but since you have that class and club, I have read many I could not pass by
Comment Written 01-Jan-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend. I am grateful for your time and I value your expert opinion.
Gypsy
Comment from padumachitta
Hi
thanks for the poem and the music
i so understand the words...it is a strange place us writers inhabit...alone, but needing each other...
happy new year, may you be well
padumachitta
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Hi
thanks for the poem and the music
i so understand the words...it is a strange place us writers inhabit...alone, but needing each other...
happy new year, may you be well
padumachitta
Comment Written 01-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend. I am grateful for your time and I value your expert opinion.
Gypsy
Comment from William Ross
very good, 3years 9 months in Spain i remember some of that hot Spanish passion. well done. wish you a very Happy New Year. Enjoy the day.
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very good, 3years 9 months in Spain i remember some of that hot Spanish passion. well done. wish you a very Happy New Year. Enjoy the day.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend.
Gypsy
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
Thank you for the warm and generous New Year wishes. May you and yours experience days of abundant joy and blessings in the coming year. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.
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Thank you for the warm and generous New Year wishes. May you and yours experience days of abundant joy and blessings in the coming year. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.
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Thank you very much, my friend. I am grateful for your time and I value your expert opinion.
Gypsy
Comment from Dean Kuch
Wow!
This is quite powerful and beautifully well written, dear Gypsy. I truly loved the image you selected, not to mention the way in which you've presented your poetic words of passionate gratitude. It's that pure, unbridled passion for your art that makes you as special as you are.
The music...whoa, it was powerfully lovely as well...
Here's hoping you have a very happy, healthy and prosperous New Year in 2017.
All the best!
~Dean :)
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Wow!
This is quite powerful and beautifully well written, dear Gypsy. I truly loved the image you selected, not to mention the way in which you've presented your poetic words of passionate gratitude. It's that pure, unbridled passion for your art that makes you as special as you are.
The music...whoa, it was powerfully lovely as well...
Here's hoping you have a very happy, healthy and prosperous New Year in 2017.
All the best!
~Dean :)
Comment Written 01-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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Thank you very much, Dean, all your reviews are very especial to me. I am grateful for your valuable reviews, your professionalism, and your kindness.
Gypsy
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You're more than welcome, Lady Gypsy Sensei. The pleasure is all mine.
Deano-son.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written and beautifully presented with the picture and colour text I enjoyed happy new year regards Jill
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Yes this is well written and beautifully presented with the picture and colour text I enjoyed happy new year regards Jill
Comment Written 01-Jan-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend. I am grateful for your time and I value your expert opinion.
Gypsy
Comment from Heather Knight
Lovely poem and lovely presentation, MariVal. I also hope you have a great new year.
I have a question: do you feel more Spanish (hot Spanish passion) or American?
Thanks for sharing.
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Lovely poem and lovely presentation, MariVal. I also hope you have a great new year.
I have a question: do you feel more Spanish (hot Spanish passion) or American?
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2017
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Hello, Maria Jose,
That is hard to answer. I was 16 years old when I moved to the United States so I feel like an American but Spanish blood runs through my veins. I feel both. If that makes any sense. They are both beautiful countries and I am very lucky to have duo citizenship to two of the best countries in the world.
Thank you, my friend,
MariVal
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It does make perfect sense. Thanks for answering. Have a great day.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Gypsy,
Your poem was written very well and I enjoyed reading it.
The pictures you've put up with your poetry is very nice too.
I also liked what you wrote to a person whom you consider as part of your family, but who is it?
Kat
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Hi Gypsy,
Your poem was written very well and I enjoyed reading it.
The pictures you've put up with your poetry is very nice too.
I also liked what you wrote to a person whom you consider as part of your family, but who is it?
Kat
Comment Written 01-Jan-2017
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thank you, Kat
Comment from kiwisteveh
Just a minute, I'll put on my dark glasses. Phew! That's better!
F and V alliteration give this some interesting sound effects, especially the slant rhyme on river/fervor. Tying it in to the title, it suggests blood-lines. It has lots of energy, echoed in the passion of the satori.
Steve
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Just a minute, I'll put on my dark glasses. Phew! That's better!
F and V alliteration give this some interesting sound effects, especially the slant rhyme on river/fervor. Tying it in to the title, it suggests blood-lines. It has lots of energy, echoed in the passion of the satori.
Steve
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Steve, you are very kind and I am grateful for your detailed and helpful review.
