Bedtime stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Pumpkin soup"Many bedtime stories for children.
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Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written a lovely bedtime story that will warm children's hearts before they sleep I enjoyed happy new year to you and yours regards Jill
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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Yes this is well written a lovely bedtime story that will warm children's hearts before they sleep I enjoyed happy new year to you and yours regards Jill
Comment Written 28-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have very happy New Year.
Comment from patcelaw
Good story about children making pumpkin soup.
Patricia
Typos:
Douglas and a (class mate) are to fill a big pan (for) one half with water. (make the first one word) the second should be (to)
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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Good story about children making pumpkin soup.
Patricia
Typos:
Douglas and a (class mate) are to fill a big pan (for) one half with water. (make the first one word) the second should be (to)
Comment Written 28-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have very happy New Year.
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a nice prose piece on making pumpkin soup. I like all soups, especially vegetable ones. Descriptive, clear and interesting write. I particularly like these lines:
"Slowly the water in the pan boils. The lid trembles gently. After a while the whole classroom smells of the soup.
"Oh, oh, my stomach rumbles", says Douglas while sniffing the great smelling soup."
Marilyn
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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This is a nice prose piece on making pumpkin soup. I like all soups, especially vegetable ones. Descriptive, clear and interesting write. I particularly like these lines:
"Slowly the water in the pan boils. The lid trembles gently. After a while the whole classroom smells of the soup.
"Oh, oh, my stomach rumbles", says Douglas while sniffing the great smelling soup."
Marilyn
Comment Written 28-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have very happy New Year.
Comment from royowen
I enjoyed your story of the whole class making pumpkin soup, from a small developing pumpkin till the day they finally reach the day when their pumpkins culminate in the class enjoying the beautiful edible substance of pumpkin soup, yum, well done Ine, Douglas at last has his hunger satisfied, well done. Blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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I enjoyed your story of the whole class making pumpkin soup, from a small developing pumpkin till the day they finally reach the day when their pumpkins culminate in the class enjoying the beautiful edible substance of pumpkin soup, yum, well done Ine, Douglas at last has his hunger satisfied, well done. Blessings, Roy
Comment Written 28-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have very happy New Year.
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Ok Ine
Comment from misscookie
I loved the artwork you choose to go with your poem
it is a perfect mat
It's nice the class learned how to make pumpkin soup with the tease,
I don't believe I ever had any. Mm
Must give it a try
thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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I loved the artwork you choose to go with your poem
it is a perfect mat
It's nice the class learned how to make pumpkin soup with the tease,
I don't believe I ever had any. Mm
Must give it a try
thank you for sharing.
Cookie
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have very happy New Year.
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You're very welcome, Happy New Years back to you, take care.
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