Selections For Book Project
Viewing comments for Chapter 54 "Once Before I Fly"possible selections for inclusion in book project
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Comment from royowen
A very nice entry in this bucket list poetry contest. The list is reduced to just one ambition to spend a short time with the eye's fancy, to spend just a short time thereof! Well presented in articulate, sensitive and elegant language, with gentleness and imagery befitting, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
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A very nice entry in this bucket list poetry contest. The list is reduced to just one ambition to spend a short time with the eye's fancy, to spend just a short time thereof! Well presented in articulate, sensitive and elegant language, with gentleness and imagery befitting, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 06-Dec-2016
Comment from mbroyles2
Well written.
I've definitely not thinking about going over the Niagara falls.
But:
"an evening without rules,
no dignity, no shame,"
"as though a hurricane passed through."
That I could get use to.
Nice job!
Michael
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Well written.
I've definitely not thinking about going over the Niagara falls.
But:
"an evening without rules,
no dignity, no shame,"
"as though a hurricane passed through."
That I could get use to.
Nice job!
Michael
Comment Written 06-Dec-2016
Comment from Ella25
Interesting point on a bucket list and she were more than that. I like the free lines and well-chosen words to complement the image. Thank you for sharing and good luck on your contest. Blessings, Ella
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Interesting point on a bucket list and she were more than that. I like the free lines and well-chosen words to complement the image. Thank you for sharing and good luck on your contest. Blessings, Ella
Comment Written 06-Dec-2016
Comment from Thomas Bowling
An excellent contest entry. You have great rhyming and meter throughout. You could tune a metronome with this poem. good luck in the contest.
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An excellent contest entry. You have great rhyming and meter throughout. You could tune a metronome with this poem. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2016
Comment from sanejane
This is a great bucket list! I hope the judges accept it as such.
but just a cup of coffee
in a cozy diner
alone, across from you
would do
Would that really be enough, when you hope for so much more?
This is a beautiful love poem. Thank you for sharing.
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This is a great bucket list! I hope the judges accept it as such.
but just a cup of coffee
in a cozy diner
alone, across from you
would do
Would that really be enough, when you hope for so much more?
This is a beautiful love poem. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 06-Dec-2016
Comment from stevensandiego
I enjoyed the poem. The rhyme flow was good. The poem kept my interest.
It was down to earth with simple language, Sometimes I read these poems
and I feel it is above my head, This was simple and to the point,
I would recommend it to my friends.,
Steven San Diego
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I enjoyed the poem. The rhyme flow was good. The poem kept my interest.
It was down to earth with simple language, Sometimes I read these poems
and I feel it is above my head, This was simple and to the point,
I would recommend it to my friends.,
Steven San Diego
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Comment Written 06-Dec-2016