Comment from bertranclan

Good

Good for children's nighttime bed stories...but I'm not a big fan of the palindrome . Has some good images, but a few lines in the beginning feel forced as you know they'll have to make some sense when reversed later. I'm not the best judge of the palindrome , but considering the inductive thought required to produce such a complex poem, I feel it is pretty good.

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 Comment Written 03-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016

Hi, and thanks for your honest review. I enjoy them. I'm going to take a look at the beginning and see whether or not I can make it read a bit better.

Comment from djeckert

Excellent

A nice rendition of whats got to be a very tough form to write. I think I tried it once. But some good imagery and concepts put forth. God blesses

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016

Thanks for the kind review. I apologize for my tardiness.

Thanks for your attention to my writing.

To the Moon and Back!

Comment from ciliverde

Excellent

I applaud you for writing this palindrome, and I think it works pretty well although some of the lines read a bit choppy:

"play and fly, fairies and Luna"

But in the reverse, it's delightful:

"Luna and fairies fly and play,
giggle and sing."

I think this would be a nice one to read to a child - when I was little I LOVED fairies and such :))
Carol

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016

Thanks for the kind review. I apologize for my tardiness.

Thanks for your attention to my writing.

To the Moon and Back!

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

very good on the palindrome poem, reads as great forwards as backwards. Nicely done on this, thanks for the share and have a great day

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016

Thanks for the kind review. I apologize for my tardiness.

Thanks for your attention to my writing.

To the Moon and Back!

Comment from WriteSins!

Excellent

I enjoy how you are very experimental when it comes to what type of poem you write. I had not heard of this style of poem before, but I really like it. Anyways, your poem is very beautiful and the word choice very much helps get the word across. Excellent work!

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016

Dear WriteSins! I'm going to start at the Shadowpoetry website, with
A and work to Z, I just decided today. I'll put them in a book!

Thanks for the kind review. I apologize for my tardiness.

Thanks for your attention to my writing.

To the Moon and Back!

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

A palindrome that makes any sense at all gets thumbs up from me. They are a curious form of wordplay where I doubt I shall go anymore. Excellent post.

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016

Thanks for the kind review. I apologize for my tardiness.

Thanks for your attention to my writing.

To the Moon and Back!

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

These are such a difficult form of poetry to write and often make no sense to me, but this is a lovely one. Well done, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016

Thanks for the kind review. I apologize for my tardiness.

Thanks for your attention to my writing.

To the Moon and Back!

Comment from Javed05

Excellent

I like this poem . Like the format. I found it is engaging for the reader and it flows smoothly. language used is great and creates good imagery.thanks for sharing with us

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016

Thanks for the kind review. I apologize for my tardiness.

Thanks for your attention to my writing.

To the Moon and Back!

Comment from trumby

Excellent

Another great read from you mate. Very nice palindrome. I love the words and the thoughts in this poem. Once again, your creativity brought me somewhere. Well done, mate. Keep writing and sharing your beautiful works.Good job.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016

thanks for your kind review, my friend. I'm sorry that my reply is tardy. to the moon and back!

Comment from Franklin Price

Excellent

Luna, I enjoyed reading and reviewing you before so I had to review you again. Although I believe poetry, for me should have rhythm and rhyme, I'm trying my best to enjoy other styles. You made it very easy for me to do that with this one. I really like the picturesque exploration of the night. It's definitely a five from me. Keep up the good work. Glad you're back. (Sorry you lost your son)

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016

Dear Franklin, I'm really happy that you enjoyed this poem. I'm impressed that you are trying to enjoy other styles of poetry and that you've opened your mind to try and enjoy new areas of writing!

Thanks,

luna