Comment from Tpa

Excellent

Superb writing, continue to hold my interest as your story unfold, leaving fragments of a mystery waiting for it to be divulged by this reader. Very entertaining.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2016

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Sankey

Excellent

A great continuation to this new story from you. I am totally absorbed, already. Mystique is in the forefront, definitely. Keep up the good work and there are NO SPAGS!

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2016

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Sefiros

Excellent

The plot thickens. Obviously, Shana has something important to the Russians, but being that she jumped into the first random car she saw, I'm thinking she doesn't know what she has. I'm just guessing; it's been a while since I read this book. Good job.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2016

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from light

Excellent

Barbara, this story in progressing at a good pace. Interesting that you mentioned the unclean fish mentioned in the Bible which were created to clean the seas, not to be eaton.
And that Shabbat is the seventh day. You have done your research
Elaine

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2016

Thank you for the kind review. Please help me stay honest to the Jewish traditions.

reply by light on 03-Dec-2016

I will. I'm not Jewish, but I did attend Messianic congregation which was Torah observant.
Elaine

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Hi, Barbara. This is an interesting chapter for sure. Seems to be a lot of undercurrent involved with this rich guy, Anderson's character. He is the typical man with too much money and guard dogs. Hmmm. Can't wait to see next chapter, my friend. Bob

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2016

ThThank you for the kind review.ank you for the kind review.

Comment from bookishfabler

Excellent

When Shana accepted Romeo's risen paw, he licked her hand.
I think I may really like this story. No nits, you are great at editing. I am out of practice though. How come I never found a man like Anderson? Handsome, I assume, sweet and rich. Lol. Well I got two out of three.
Hugs Heidi

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2016

Thank you for the kind review. I haven't found a man like Anderson either. LOL I can dream.

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes this is well written my friend and the story is moving alone at the right pace I must say I am enjoying it and look forward to the next chapter well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2016

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

So Anderson is rich and protecting Shana. He knows the people who are after her, but he doesn't know why. She does. I guess she'll have to trust him and tell him.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2016

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi Barbara,

Good instalment here again. Very well written and technically sound as well. I am intrigued by Anderson.

Inside Shana was greeted by three German Shepherds - you do like your dogs, don't you. LOL

All the best
G

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2016

I love my dogs, ALL dogs. Shana wants a cat, but I am stalling her. LOL Thank you for the kind review.

reply by giraffmang on 03-Dec-2016

No... never cats!

Comment from Sis Cat

Excellent

Barbara, I was waiting for those dogs to appear. : )

This is a dreamy chapter which displays Anderson's wealth--penthouse, maid, butler. He is like a fairy tale prince. This sets up the possibility of romance between him and Shana. I am anxious to see what happens next between them.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2016

Thank you for the kind review.