Comment from Oatmeal

Excellent

Luna,

Well chosen words are expressive. The theme is strong. Your feelings are expressed well. Your arrangement looks very nice. The flow is smooth. Very descriptive and created impressions that are very vivid and understandable.

It is perfectly written and completely error free.

It was a pleasure to read. Your feelings are very understandable and expressed through the poem.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016

Dear Oatmeal, your review is chock - full of complimentary words. Knowing you to be truthful, I am thrilled.

See you again soon!

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

This poem has a child-like quality about it. I remember a time when I was a child and innocent as well. It makes me feel nostalgic for my childhood, and that time wasn't my happiest. It gives me a warm glow inside. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016

Neither was my childhood happy; is that perhaps why we feel nostalgic?

Insightful review... Thanks!

Comment from mbroyles2

Excellent

Oh I should have saved this one for tonight. So we go from nightmare to peace. Or vice-versa. I like the repeat at the end of each stanza to emphasize the previous words.again excellent pace and beautiful images
Michael

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2016

Yes, Michael, that's my mind; from nightmare to peace. I appreciate you sharing with me your positive thoughts.

I appreciate your continued attention to my portfolio, and thanks again!

luna

Comment from Jackarrie

Exceptional

Hi,

I love this poem, it is a joy to read. I really like how you repeat the last line of each stanza, very effective.

Well done, I rate this poem a six as exceptional.

Mary

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2016

Dear Jackarrie,

My heartfelt thanks for this exceptional six-star review. I'm happy that you enjoyed reading the poem, and that you found the repeats effective.

Again, this warms my heart!

I appreciate your continued attention to my portfolio, and thanks again!

luna

Comment from joannakruk

Excellent

Fantastic creation that addresses the multitude of f?dreams that we have. From the calming pleasant ones where we become peacefully weightless to those making us weep, dreams a?really are cosmic and valuable. Great flow.

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2016

Dear joanna,

Thank you for this more than gracious review. I enjoyed reading it.

I appreciate your continued attention to my portfolio, and thanks again!

luna

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

I love how the last lines repeat, very pretty. In dreams....possibilities are endless! Wouldn't it be nice to keep some of our dreams through the day?? Loved this, Happy Thanksgiving!!!

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2016

I find that I am able to keep many of my dreams with the use of a dream journal that I write in prior to getting out of bed. I love going back and reading them! Happy gobble gobble day to You, too, Irish Rain. (I'm pure bred Irish, I assume from your name you are as well?

I appreciate your continued attention to my portfolio, and thanks again!

luna

reply by Irish Rain on 27-Nov-2016

I believe my family is Scotch-Irish, Americanized, ha ha...have a great day!

Comment from barleygirl

Excellent

Your lyrical message is very original, showing the ups & downs of dream-life. On the other poem of yours I just reviewed, I felt it was too much repetition, but this one has a very well-crafted bit of repetition at the end of each stanza. I prefer when repetition is varied like this, rather than exact same thing over & over thru-out. The rhyming & rhythm feel right for this magic carpet ride.

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016

Again, Thanks for this kind review, barleygirl. I apologize for the tardiness of the reply.

As always, thank you for your attention to my writing.

To the Moon and back!

Comment from robina1978

Exceptional

I am so sorry for your loss, it is the worst that can happen loosing a son. My mother lost a daughter by suicide. You wrote a beautiful Monotetra, you don't see these very often. The artwork complements your poem perfectly.

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2016

Hi, and this is really quite something! Thank you for the exceptional six-star rating for my poem. I'm honored by that :)

Thank you so much for your kind condolences. I truly appreciate it. I'm so sorry for your mom and family. He would have been your brother, right? Please accept my sympathy as another person enters into The Club We Don't Want to Join,

Yours,

luna

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

very good, nicely done on this, good rhyming with a good meteri like how you repeated the last of each line on this. Thanks for the share and have a great day

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016

Dear Bill,

Thanks for your gracious review, and I'm happy that you told me some things you liked about it.

I appreciate your continued attention to my work...Thanks to the moon and back!

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

You know Luna, i really like this poem I like the set out and how the forth line in each verse is repeated within the line. Well done thanks for sharing

dip

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016

Dear DR DIP,

I'm glad that you enjoyed the set out of this poem and the repeats. Thanks for the complimentary review!

I appreciate your continued attention to my work...Thanks to the moon and back!