Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "The Land of Sleep "a place to gather my poetic forms
27 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
You're not only back, Luna. You're back with a vengeance, like a woman on a mission.
Either you've been writing a LOT while you were away and have lot's of poems already written, just waiting to be released, or...
Writing poetry simply comes very easily to you; almost like second nature.
Like another fellow poet here named danpald, I've noticed fluttering faeries are often mentioned in the context.
It's fantasy... I get it.
The story behind this write of a mother's nightly bedtime stories filled with dire, dangerous dragons and spiritous sprites read to her daughter was well conveyed.
The rhythm and rhyme were wonderfully well done also.
I'll lay you ten-to-one odds that you're a HUGE Game of Thrones fan, just like me.
Well done...
~Dean
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
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You're not only back, Luna. You're back with a vengeance, like a woman on a mission.
Either you've been writing a LOT while you were away and have lot's of poems already written, just waiting to be released, or...
Writing poetry simply comes very easily to you; almost like second nature.
Like another fellow poet here named danpald, I've noticed fluttering faeries are often mentioned in the context.
It's fantasy... I get it.
The story behind this write of a mother's nightly bedtime stories filled with dire, dangerous dragons and spiritous sprites read to her daughter was well conveyed.
The rhythm and rhyme were wonderfully well done also.
I'll lay you ten-to-one odds that you're a HUGE Game of Thrones fan, just like me.
Well done...
~Dean
Comment Written 21-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
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Dear Dean -
How did you know that I am a HUGE fan of Game of Thrones? lol Your review was lovely and I appreciate you sharing your thoughts about the poem with me. I'll be reading some of your work very soon.
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Call it a ...hunch...Luna, LOL.
You're more than welcome. :)
Comment from Janet Foor
A spectacular poem from beginning to end. I loved the beginning with the "Once upon a Time" line with magic and fairies. Truly the Land of Sleep can be a magical place.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
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A spectacular poem from beginning to end. I loved the beginning with the "Once upon a Time" line with magic and fairies. Truly the Land of Sleep can be a magical place.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 20-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
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Dear Janet,
Thank you for the review. I'm happy that the piece touched you in certain ways.
More importantly, thank you for the beautiful six - star review. I'm honored and flattered that you have me that sixth star.
I appreciate it more than you'll ever know
Comment from nancyjam
Beautiful rhyming and strong meter
carry this poem along.
the imagery is magical and fits the
theme of dreams beautifully.
Nice presentation too.
Nancy
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
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Beautiful rhyming and strong meter
carry this poem along.
the imagery is magical and fits the
theme of dreams beautifully.
Nice presentation too.
Nancy
Comment Written 20-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
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Thank you for your very kind review.
I appreciate your kind attention to my work
Comment from trumby
I love it. I love the words used. Good rhyme from start to end. You captured me from the start and I can't wait to read more of it. The images are just perfect for the words. It reminded me of those times when Mum used to read me stories and when I slept, I dream about all of them.
Fantastic read, I look forward reading more of your creation. Lovely. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
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I love it. I love the words used. Good rhyme from start to end. You captured me from the start and I can't wait to read more of it. The images are just perfect for the words. It reminded me of those times when Mum used to read me stories and when I slept, I dream about all of them.
Fantastic read, I look forward reading more of your creation. Lovely. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
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Hey trumby there you are again. Thanks so much for your support of my portfolio.
Comment from Irish Rain
How lovely is your land of sleep! Magical fairies, castles, everything twinkling and glowing, I do believe I'd live there forever if I could. Lovely how this poem starts out too, from your mothers stories, blessings...
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
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How lovely is your land of sleep! Magical fairies, castles, everything twinkling and glowing, I do believe I'd live there forever if I could. Lovely how this poem starts out too, from your mothers stories, blessings...
Comment Written 20-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
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Thank you for your very kind review.
I appreciate your kind attention to my work
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Luna!
This poem is a sheer delight. Your quatrains are smooth in delivery with beautiful meter and rhyme. The transitions, with one line flowing into the next, are simple, yet masterful.
I thoroughly enjoyed this nod to the fairy tales of old.
Thanks for sharing!
Kim
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
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Hi Luna!
This poem is a sheer delight. Your quatrains are smooth in delivery with beautiful meter and rhyme. The transitions, with one line flowing into the next, are simple, yet masterful.
I thoroughly enjoyed this nod to the fairy tales of old.
Thanks for sharing!
Kim
Comment Written 20-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
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Oh my, Convey, I'm so very happy that you got hooked into what the poem stood for.
Not to be ignored is the surprise and happiness of the beautiful six star review. I'm flattered and honored, my friend.
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Jeni. You have written some wonderful Quatrains here, my friend. From start to finish they are fantastic. Your images are superb, like:
"The mistress of the castle, she
awaited me to come and see
what she was spinning on her wheel ~
gossamer dresses, how genteel." (genteel indeed)
The font is much better by the way. thanks so much, Bob
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
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Hi, Jeni. You have written some wonderful Quatrains here, my friend. From start to finish they are fantastic. Your images are superb, like:
"The mistress of the castle, she
awaited me to come and see
what she was spinning on her wheel ~
gossamer dresses, how genteel." (genteel indeed)
The font is much better by the way. thanks so much, Bob
Comment Written 20-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
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A. I'm happy that you enjoyed this and liked the images you caught. I like our new friendship. I'm out of town as my sister-in-law passed this morning. I'll be back to normal soon and will seek out your portfolio.
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My condolences, Jeni. (: Bob
Comment from Bill O'Bier
I love the the land of sleep - dreams are always a pleasant way to review the day and work out problems. Bravo my friend, a beautiful work- with a great choice of artwork. Thanks for writing this piece.
Wishing you the best...
Bill~
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
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I love the the land of sleep - dreams are always a pleasant way to review the day and work out problems. Bravo my friend, a beautiful work- with a great choice of artwork. Thanks for writing this piece.
Wishing you the best...
Bill~
Comment Written 20-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
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Thank you for your very kind review.
I appreciate your kind attention to my work, Bill.
Comment from Heather Knight
The land of sleep is a great place. Full of possibilities, full of magic.
You're a great poet. This is very good.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
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The land of sleep is a great place. Full of possibilities, full of magic.
You're a great poet. This is very good.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
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Comment from mvbrooks
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem. You captured me in the first two lines and I couldn't wait to read more.
The verse is light and the rhyme is consistent and unforced. The images are common to many (so easy to relate to). The idea of a king who will slay dragons for you makes the fairy-tale complete. And the last two lines tie up the story well.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
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I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem. You captured me in the first two lines and I couldn't wait to read more.
The verse is light and the rhyme is consistent and unforced. The images are common to many (so easy to relate to). The idea of a king who will slay dragons for you makes the fairy-tale complete. And the last two lines tie up the story well.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
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Dear mvbrooks,
I'm so glad that you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for sharing your favorite parts with me.
Most of all, thank you for the heavenly six-star review. I'm humbled and honored..
