The Boss Baby: Explains Trump Win
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Comment from AnnaLinda
Lancellot,
You are a very talented writer and using the boss baby
as a vehicle to convey your strong message was brilliant!
I liked your script and conversational method. Flawless
in both method and presentation.
Fantastic explosive ending. Great two last stanzas
and this part stood out to me:
"A final warning: You can continue to live within your closed echo chambers, or forums where everyone thinks and speaks the same. Yeah, that's real diversity"
Linda
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016
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Lancellot,
You are a very talented writer and using the boss baby
as a vehicle to convey your strong message was brilliant!
I liked your script and conversational method. Flawless
in both method and presentation.
Fantastic explosive ending. Great two last stanzas
and this part stood out to me:
"A final warning: You can continue to live within your closed echo chambers, or forums where everyone thinks and speaks the same. Yeah, that's real diversity"
Linda
Comment Written 14-Nov-2016
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Thank you very much
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Lance,
You do have an excellent way of getting your points across. How clever to use the baby explaining to the five year old. Level thinking, we need more of that here.
I didn't see any SPAG or need for improvement.
Good job!
Kim
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016
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Hi Lance,
You do have an excellent way of getting your points across. How clever to use the baby explaining to the five year old. Level thinking, we need more of that here.
I didn't see any SPAG or need for improvement.
Good job!
Kim
Comment Written 14-Nov-2016
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Thank you very much
Comment from janalma
You always write with great sincerity. I am proud of you for speaking out against liberal PCBS. If we don't start telling the truth in America, whatever will happen to us. Hiding our head under a basket, like hiding our light, will get us nowhere. Politicians often don't tell the truth, but often liberals and liberal media don't either. What is the point? And why do so many hate America. They talk about leaving but they don't. I wonder WHY? I have my suspicions. Lol.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016
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You always write with great sincerity. I am proud of you for speaking out against liberal PCBS. If we don't start telling the truth in America, whatever will happen to us. Hiding our head under a basket, like hiding our light, will get us nowhere. Politicians often don't tell the truth, but often liberals and liberal media don't either. What is the point? And why do so many hate America. They talk about leaving but they don't. I wonder WHY? I have my suspicions. Lol.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2016
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Thank you very much
Comment from Alex Biasin
I thought this was a very well thought out and well written piece.
The arguments were logical and you used some good examples to drive your point of view home.
The satirical use of the baby explaining the arguments was well done.
I may not agree with your argument or some of your reasoning, but you have expressed them very logically and well.
All in all an excellent piece of political commentary.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016
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I thought this was a very well thought out and well written piece.
The arguments were logical and you used some good examples to drive your point of view home.
The satirical use of the baby explaining the arguments was well done.
I may not agree with your argument or some of your reasoning, but you have expressed them very logically and well.
All in all an excellent piece of political commentary.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2016
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Thank you very much
Comment from Heidi M
You used a unique format to get the ideas across. This was well scripted and I liked your choice of the presentation coming from BB's POV. I also appreciate the links you included. I watched the entire 16:24 of the CNN clip. Thank goodness for cameras on cell phones so we can get the entire story, not just what bits and pieces 'they' want us to see and hear.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016
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You used a unique format to get the ideas across. This was well scripted and I liked your choice of the presentation coming from BB's POV. I also appreciate the links you included. I watched the entire 16:24 of the CNN clip. Thank goodness for cameras on cell phones so we can get the entire story, not just what bits and pieces 'they' want us to see and hear.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2016
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Thank you very much
Comment from amada
Wow, this is a great political piece. Consider it a gem, from me a very apolitical person from an apolitical family. But I have voted...before, and i have made my mistakes!
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Wow, this is a great political piece. Consider it a gem, from me a very apolitical person from an apolitical family. But I have voted...before, and i have made my mistakes!
Comment Written 13-Nov-2016
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Thank you very much
Comment from Dean Kuch
I read this entire script last night over the phone to a friend, Lance. I got them laughing right along with me, lol.
I don't believe I'd ever had the pleasure of reading any of baby Bosses' commentary before last night.
Are there more of them?
Living in a very rural part of America as I do, I was very surprised by how many locals turned out in droves to express their opinions about our country. I ran into folks who hadn't voted for years but felt compelled to vote in this election.
I nearly didn't vote at all, but caved and voted in the end.
There were some exceptional lines throughout, and you really nailed it with this line: "You see. There is a good reason they ignored Trump's silly comments, and some voters stayed home. Those who went to the polls didn't necessarily vote for Trump. They simply voted against... You!"
Sure did!
Good stuff, buddy...
~Dean
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016
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I read this entire script last night over the phone to a friend, Lance. I got them laughing right along with me, lol.
I don't believe I'd ever had the pleasure of reading any of baby Bosses' commentary before last night.
Are there more of them?
Living in a very rural part of America as I do, I was very surprised by how many locals turned out in droves to express their opinions about our country. I ran into folks who hadn't voted for years but felt compelled to vote in this election.
I nearly didn't vote at all, but caved and voted in the end.
There were some exceptional lines throughout, and you really nailed it with this line: "You see. There is a good reason they ignored Trump's silly comments, and some voters stayed home. Those who went to the polls didn't necessarily vote for Trump. They simply voted against... You!"
Sure did!
Good stuff, buddy...
~Dean
Comment Written 13-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016
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Thank you very much
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My pleasure,Lance.
Comment from Ridley Williams
Hello, Lancellot,
You make some great points in this piece. Living in rural America, as my wife and I do, I was surprised how many local people came out to express their opinion about our country. I ran into folks who had not voted for many elections but they were compelled to show up for this one.
I also agree with your premise as to why things turned out the way they did. As a miner, my rights (1872 mining law), have been overturned by a Supreme Court that believes they are worrying about the future at the cost of those of us who live in the here and now.
My wife's health insurance, under Obama Care, will triple as of January. Our income will not go up, leaving us to figure out how to cope with rising costs of living. Something has to give...and I guess we just saw what that something is...
Great work with this explanation of the election...you got my vote!
Later,
Bill
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016
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Hello, Lancellot,
You make some great points in this piece. Living in rural America, as my wife and I do, I was surprised how many local people came out to express their opinion about our country. I ran into folks who had not voted for many elections but they were compelled to show up for this one.
I also agree with your premise as to why things turned out the way they did. As a miner, my rights (1872 mining law), have been overturned by a Supreme Court that believes they are worrying about the future at the cost of those of us who live in the here and now.
My wife's health insurance, under Obama Care, will triple as of January. Our income will not go up, leaving us to figure out how to cope with rising costs of living. Something has to give...and I guess we just saw what that something is...
Great work with this explanation of the election...you got my vote!
Later,
Bill
Comment Written 13-Nov-2016
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Thank you very much
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Those who went to the polls didn't necessarily vote for Trump. They simply voted against... You! (AHEM!)
I saw an interesting comic the other day, Trump supporters aren't out rioting because they have to get up and go to work the next day. (Says it all!)
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016
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Those who went to the polls didn't necessarily vote for Trump. They simply voted against... You! (AHEM!)
I saw an interesting comic the other day, Trump supporters aren't out rioting because they have to get up and go to work the next day. (Says it all!)
Comment Written 13-Nov-2016
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Thank you very much
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Lance. Wow! This is ingenius from start to finish. good job. I love the baby format. LOL
Great lines throughout and you nailed everything in a very clever write: "You see. There is a good reason they ignored Trump's silly comments, and some voters stayed home. Those who went to the polls didn't necessarily vote for Trump. They simply voted against... You!"
Suggestions: "we have people who usual belong to the Republican Party;" (usually)
Bravo, Lance, my friend. Bob
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016
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Hi, Lance. Wow! This is ingenius from start to finish. good job. I love the baby format. LOL
Great lines throughout and you nailed everything in a very clever write: "You see. There is a good reason they ignored Trump's silly comments, and some voters stayed home. Those who went to the polls didn't necessarily vote for Trump. They simply voted against... You!"
Suggestions: "we have people who usual belong to the Republican Party;" (usually)
Bravo, Lance, my friend. Bob
Comment Written 13-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016
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Thank you very much