Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Dreams are made possible"Words to pass on to my children
28 total reviews
Comment from Chrissy710
A well deserved six Mary your poem although not long but boy does it say a lot. an excellent message to us all appreciate even the most minute beauty in the world. forgive ourselves etc. lovely presentation and this should rate highly in the contest good luck Cheers Christne
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016
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A well deserved six Mary your poem although not long but boy does it say a lot. an excellent message to us all appreciate even the most minute beauty in the world. forgive ourselves etc. lovely presentation and this should rate highly in the contest good luck Cheers Christne
Comment Written 12-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016
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Thanks Chrissy for an exceptional review for y free verse I really am chuffed with your six stars. Mary
Comment from joannakruk
Six, six, six. The message is beautiful, hope manifest and the power of the individual expressed. At a time in my life when I am understanding my identity, this poem is bountiful in motivation. Free flowing, necessary to exude the sense that form is unnecessary when one acknowledges their innate, personal beauty and path. Thank you for creating this.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016
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Six, six, six. The message is beautiful, hope manifest and the power of the individual expressed. At a time in my life when I am understanding my identity, this poem is bountiful in motivation. Free flowing, necessary to exude the sense that form is unnecessary when one acknowledges their innate, personal beauty and path. Thank you for creating this.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the exceptional rating , i am so pleased. Your comments are great too, I appreciate it Mary
Comment from Quantum Traveler
The Imagery...The Writing...The Complete Setting all Melts Together to make a statement about the Potential of One's Ability to Rise to the Occasion and Be Whoever One Wants to Be...To Follow their Bliss...To Dream the Dream...To Be Unique...and...Explore all the Possibilities in Life.
An Outstanding and Unique Writing...Quantum Writer...Phil.
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The Imagery...The Writing...The Complete Setting all Melts Together to make a statement about the Potential of One's Ability to Rise to the Occasion and Be Whoever One Wants to Be...To Follow their Bliss...To Dream the Dream...To Be Unique...and...Explore all the Possibilities in Life.
An Outstanding and Unique Writing...Quantum Writer...Phil.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016
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I am so pleased that you feel this about my free verse poem, I appreciate it. Mary
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Your Canvas has been Painted with a Fine Piece of Art Work...A Uniqueness of Style.
A Very Nice Painting Mary...Q.T...Phil.
Comment from Irish Rain
Wonderfully true. I especially like the line, 'a witness to the awe'...because it's absolutely everywhere, if we but see. Lovely free verse, blessings....
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016
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Wonderfully true. I especially like the line, 'a witness to the awe'...because it's absolutely everywhere, if we but see. Lovely free verse, blessings....
Comment Written 11-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016
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Thanks Irish rain for a wonderful review. Mary
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
It's what I call back to basics. We need to find what makes us happy and do it. Life can get us all tangled up in unnecessary stuff and we forget who we are. Your poem makes me think that we all need to remember to take care of ourselves, do the little things and remember that just because we're unique doesn't mean we're horrible people
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It's what I call back to basics. We need to find what makes us happy and do it. Life can get us all tangled up in unnecessary stuff and we forget who we are. Your poem makes me think that we all need to remember to take care of ourselves, do the little things and remember that just because we're unique doesn't mean we're horrible people
Comment Written 11-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016
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Thanks for a wonderful review with brilliant comments Mary
Comment from jlsavell
Jackarrie,
Your beautiful free verse is an exceptional philosophical view. One in which all of us should heed. For dreams are in all of us, down the hall, just waiting for us to scale that wall. Jlsavell
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016
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Jackarrie,
Your beautiful free verse is an exceptional philosophical view. One in which all of us should heed. For dreams are in all of us, down the hall, just waiting for us to scale that wall. Jlsavell
Comment Written 11-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016
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Thanks jlsavell your great remarks and exceptional review.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Wow! An amazing train of thought.
Well presented and free flowing with such a positive message.
The world needs more positive role models and motivation.
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2016
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Wow! An amazing train of thought.
Well presented and free flowing with such a positive message.
The world needs more positive role models and motivation.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 11-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2016
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Thank you so much Shirley for such a glowing review and great comments. Mary
Comment from krys123
Hello to your Mary and I hope you are fine;
-well if wisdom were plentiful and enriches you'd be the most wealthiest person alive today because of this writing.
-It is so true that the smallest of the smallest and the farthest of the farthest are most gratifying and obtain from one's heart and dreams that are created and believing they're all true and real: "be a willing beginner" and "a witness to the awe in the art of living". These words are the foundation and substance of your writing you have expounded on this within imagery that is so expressed in wonderment that your writing should do really well in the contest.
-I love the saying in your picture and it is so true with wisdom of "the most difficult times for many are the ones we give ourselves".
-Thanks for sharing and may you do very well in the contest is to receive the ribbon that is planted next to your poem.
-Take care and have a good one wherever you can find it.
Alex
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2016
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Hello to your Mary and I hope you are fine;
-well if wisdom were plentiful and enriches you'd be the most wealthiest person alive today because of this writing.
-It is so true that the smallest of the smallest and the farthest of the farthest are most gratifying and obtain from one's heart and dreams that are created and believing they're all true and real: "be a willing beginner" and "a witness to the awe in the art of living". These words are the foundation and substance of your writing you have expounded on this within imagery that is so expressed in wonderment that your writing should do really well in the contest.
-I love the saying in your picture and it is so true with wisdom of "the most difficult times for many are the ones we give ourselves".
-Thanks for sharing and may you do very well in the contest is to receive the ribbon that is planted next to your poem.
-Take care and have a good one wherever you can find it.
Alex
Comment Written 11-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2016
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Hi Alex I really appreciate your time you have given to review my free verse. You make so happy with your wonderful comments. I really appreciate it.
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You are so welcome, Mary, and take care and have a good one where and when you can always find it.
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Alex
Comment from patcelaw
Mary the final words of your poem wrap the poems' message usp nicely. Blessings, Patricia
In our own style
because
we are all unique
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2016
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Mary the final words of your poem wrap the poems' message usp nicely. Blessings, Patricia
In our own style
because
we are all unique
Comment Written 11-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2016
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Thanks Patricia I really appreciate that. Mary
Comment from Dean Kuch
Yes, our likes and dislikes--the ways in which we choose to express ourselves...
Of all of these, we are as unique and diversely made as the intricate structure one one individual snowflake.
But also like one sparkling snowflake, when we come together just as snowflakes do in a storm to embrace each other's individuality rather than scorn it, we can create a beautiful, pristine backdrop of purest white.
Lovely free verse offering from you, Mary.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2016
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Yes, our likes and dislikes--the ways in which we choose to express ourselves...
Of all of these, we are as unique and diversely made as the intricate structure one one individual snowflake.
But also like one sparkling snowflake, when we come together just as snowflakes do in a storm to embrace each other's individuality rather than scorn it, we can create a beautiful, pristine backdrop of purest white.
Lovely free verse offering from you, Mary.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2016
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Thanks Dean for such an excellent review and lovely comments. Much appreciated. Mary
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The pleasure was entirely mine, Mary.
~Dean :}