Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

I don't know what to say. The story isn't over, so I can't yell at you for letting her go off with strangers... or at least trying to stop her. Let me see what happened...

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2016

Thanks Phyllis. I know. That is why ignorance is bliss. Had I stayed in Phoenix, I would have been ignorant of the fact and slept well...Thank you for your RR*R. Go ahead and yell, it won't be the first time! Have a great week!

Comment from LaRosa

Excellent

As always, absolutely hilarious mom story telling.
The whole first sentence was a 'grabber' which made this reader hold her breath practically, waiting to see what would happen with the glass of wine. Make ME a bit tipsy.

The 'Happy Drunky' and 'Ms Southern Comfort', perfect opposites, were delightfully played.

The mother's need to be a cool mom vs. a lifetime history of playing the controller adds a wonderful tension to this plot.

Can't wait for more!

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2016

Hi LaRosa, thank you for the wonderful RR&R and I loved your assessment. Thank you for stopping by. I appreciate you! Have a great weekend!

reply by LaRosa on 10-Nov-2016

:)

Comment from MelB

Excellent

Hi Mary, I'm assuming all turned out okay with your daughter, but I was hoping to get an update in this chapter. I will move on to the next post and see if the answer is in there.

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2016

Hi Melissa, thank you for your RR&R. I hope to have the conclusion up by the weekend. Thank you for stopping by. Have a great weekend.

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Oh my dear friend I wish I had a six for all of Bruni's (and your) adventures. Now don't think I just read for Bruni, no I read for you too, it's just that I love her attitude.
No problems noted

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2016

Hi Barb, thank you for your RR&R and virtual six. Always the challenge posting a story so late in the week. No worries, I know Bruni is the real draw :) She's just fine with that too! Have a great weekend and thank you again.

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

AH the saga continues Though I was a bit confused at first as initially I thought i was tre reading the last chapter. I love Bruni, she's my favourite!
I love your style of writing so humorous and enjoyable

dipster

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2016

Hi Dip, yes, I recapped the story at the beginning for those coming to it late, without having to read the other chapters. Sorry for the confusion. Everyone loves Bruni--she's beginning to get on my last nerve :) Thank you so much for stopping by and offering a review. Much appreciated!

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Obviously, you made it home without committing infanticide, so I'd say it was a successful weekend in that regard. LOL.

Does "To Be Continued" mean it's going to get worse? Bless your heart. Been on any mother/offspring trips again?

I'm enjoying this immensely. You handled it better than I would have. I'd have ended up in jail. LOL. 8-)

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 Comment Written 10-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2016

Hi Yvonne, thank you for your RR&R and LOL review. No infanticide, but certainly considered parental emancipation! Other than entire family trips, no single kid vacations since. Thank you for your kind words! Have a great week!

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

Too funny. A few years ago my son worked at a pool hall. He called me one evening and said, "Dad, Carrie just walked in here with a twenty-four-year-old guy. Do you want me to put her on the phone?"

I said, "No, put the guy on the phone."

I said to the guy, "My daughter is sixteen. Have her at my house in fifteen minutes or the police will put what's left of you in jail."

Twelve minutes later Carrie walked in the front door.

"Thanks a lot Dad."

"Your welcome. Your also grounded."

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2016

Hi Thomas, I've lost this damn story three times today! My computer kept shutting down mid-stream. It's a wonder I ever finished with the computer still intact. Your daughter and son...loved the way you handled that. Shame on the guy if he knew her age. You never know these days because the girls look so much older at sixteen. Thanks for stopping by and have a great weekend!