To Last Forever
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Simone said"Poems by Michael
22 total reviews
Comment from Steven Latty
Good poem. The flow of the poem doesn't seemed forced, the rhymes are good. I like the picture you added as well. Thanks for the share.
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Good poem. The flow of the poem doesn't seemed forced, the rhymes are good. I like the picture you added as well. Thanks for the share.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2016
Comment from Ricky1024
Cute and produced very well.
Subject matter was intetesting as well as approach.
Objective Content accomplished theme while aAdjective Content conqured Imagery
Ricky by the Bay!
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Cute and produced very well.
Subject matter was intetesting as well as approach.
Objective Content accomplished theme while aAdjective Content conqured Imagery
Ricky by the Bay!
Comment Written 01-Nov-2016
Comment from angel123
Your emotional poem is well written and I enjoyed reading it. Your artwork choice is interesting and goes well with your poem. Interesting poem type.
Angel123
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Your emotional poem is well written and I enjoyed reading it. Your artwork choice is interesting and goes well with your poem. Interesting poem type.
Angel123
Comment Written 01-Nov-2016
Comment from ronnie k
RECONCILE, I find your poetry so demanding, I love that aspect, my poetic love will not allow me to give in without finding out what gems lay within your lines, thanks for pushing my art.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2016
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RECONCILE, I find your poetry so demanding, I love that aspect, my poetic love will not allow me to give in without finding out what gems lay within your lines, thanks for pushing my art.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2016
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Hi Ronnie...-smile-
ah thank you man...really appreciate you enjoying my ah release.
but I am shy in comparison to some. you gave Miss Meri a good ...on accident obviously....it happens fingers slip....love Michael
Comment from Bill O'Bier
As always, clever and rich. A wonderful poem my friend. Thanks for sharing this fine piece.
Wishing you all the best...
Bill
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As always, clever and rich. A wonderful poem my friend. Thanks for sharing this fine piece.
Wishing you all the best...
Bill
Comment Written 31-Oct-2016
Comment from MissMerri
Just the emotion you pour into your poetry makes it sing to the reader, Michael. Your heart is there in the words... so much so, anyone can feel what you express. It is proof you have the heart of a poet and the skills to make it come alive on the page. Keep writing. You are a blessing.
~ Meadow
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Just the emotion you pour into your poetry makes it sing to the reader, Michael. Your heart is there in the words... so much so, anyone can feel what you express. It is proof you have the heart of a poet and the skills to make it come alive on the page. Keep writing. You are a blessing.
~ Meadow
Comment Written 31-Oct-2016
Comment from amada
This is a lovely poem in interpretation of this beautiful song. My fave line: "got dressed up all angel white
and everything..." sweet sweetness in the sound of the music and your song here. Best wishes, Michael.
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This is a lovely poem in interpretation of this beautiful song. My fave line: "got dressed up all angel white
and everything..." sweet sweetness in the sound of the music and your song here. Best wishes, Michael.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2016
Comment from Moon baby
This was interesting. Creative and though the message is obvious in one way, yet obscure in another. I like your style, and the poem.
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This was interesting. Creative and though the message is obvious in one way, yet obscure in another. I like your style, and the poem.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2016
Comment from kathleenspalding
Even though the words are kind of poetically mixed up, they flow well and the meaning is clear and powerful and ironic, and I like it. Excellent choice of artwork. Good job.
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Even though the words are kind of poetically mixed up, they flow well and the meaning is clear and powerful and ironic, and I like it. Excellent choice of artwork. Good job.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2016
Comment from DonandVicki
I like the feeling of your poem and the artwork and media complement your poem very well. I can almost see the little girl dancing through the lyrics.
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I like the feeling of your poem and the artwork and media complement your poem very well. I can almost see the little girl dancing through the lyrics.
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Comment Written 30-Oct-2016
