To Last Forever
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Comment from winnona
A very nicely written piece. Your well-chosen words flowed nicely line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. Your artwork and music completed the piece.
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A very nicely written piece. Your well-chosen words flowed nicely line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. Your artwork and music completed the piece.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2016
Comment from Matthew Franklin
Very nice poem. I like the repetition of the first stanza as the last stanza. The use of spring is also well done, it carries with it the idea of new beginning and new growth. Great Job.
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Very nice poem. I like the repetition of the first stanza as the last stanza. The use of spring is also well done, it carries with it the idea of new beginning and new growth. Great Job.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2016
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Mike. Excellent poetry her, my friend. It is very inspirational and telling of your character, I think. I like these lines in pRTICULAR: lOTS OF MEANING:
"good morning
goodnight
all the time
you're in mind"
Bravo, my friend. Bob
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Hi, Mike. Excellent poetry her, my friend. It is very inspirational and telling of your character, I think. I like these lines in pRTICULAR: lOTS OF MEANING:
"good morning
goodnight
all the time
you're in mind"
Bravo, my friend. Bob
Comment Written 12-Nov-2016
Comment from William Ross
very good, nicely done on the free verse, yes God is always on the mind, morning, noon and night. Thanks for the share and thoughts. have a wonderful day.
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very good, nicely done on the free verse, yes God is always on the mind, morning, noon and night. Thanks for the share and thoughts. have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2016
Comment from Dean Kuch
buenas noches
Buenos di'as
todo el tiempo ... Loved this, Michael.
As believers, God is always and forever with us, and the Holy Spirit dwells within our hearts.
We pray, and we meditate while reading and studying the Bible.
The pastor of my church once put it like this:
"A car comes with an owner's manual. That manual tells you everything you need to know to keep your new car in pristine running condition.
Human beings have an owner's manual too; the Holy Bible.
The Bible explains to us what we need to do in order to receive eternal salvation and everlasting life, and live our lives well while receiving God's blessings, during our short time here on earth."
That made a great deal of sense to me.
Wonderfully well done, Michael.
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buenas noches
Buenos di'as
todo el tiempo ... Loved this, Michael.
As believers, God is always and forever with us, and the Holy Spirit dwells within our hearts.
We pray, and we meditate while reading and studying the Bible.
The pastor of my church once put it like this:
"A car comes with an owner's manual. That manual tells you everything you need to know to keep your new car in pristine running condition.
Human beings have an owner's manual too; the Holy Bible.
The Bible explains to us what we need to do in order to receive eternal salvation and everlasting life, and live our lives well while receiving God's blessings, during our short time here on earth."
That made a great deal of sense to me.
Wonderfully well done, Michael.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2016
Comment from Rubylou
A very interesting piece with wonderfully written words of imagery. Perfect love- a most precious gift.
Nice flow and the repeating is a great touch.
Nicely done.
Rubylou
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A very interesting piece with wonderfully written words of imagery. Perfect love- a most precious gift.
Nice flow and the repeating is a great touch.
Nicely done.
Rubylou
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Comment Written 11-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2016
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10*4 ....you can stick that in your wallet pocket....-smile-...appreciate ya Rubylou...
Comment from Javed05
I like this poem . I found it is engaging for the reader and it flows smoothly. language used is great and creates good imagery.thanks for sharing with us
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I like this poem . I found it is engaging for the reader and it flows smoothly. language used is great and creates good imagery.thanks for sharing with us
Comment Written 11-Nov-2016
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Love that lasts forever is what everybody seeks.
Some never find it.
Poem depicts this theme nicely and presents its message well.
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Love that lasts forever is what everybody seeks.
Some never find it.
Poem depicts this theme nicely and presents its message well.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2016
Comment from Marykelly
The passage of time is noted by the repetition of good morning and good night and the suggestion is that the time itself is good. The sparse tightness of the poem suggests that the speaker is on solid ground with human relationship and on solid ground with a spiritual relationship, no fluff or excess. The message I get is in the title, love for the speaker goes on always.
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The passage of time is noted by the repetition of good morning and good night and the suggestion is that the time itself is good. The sparse tightness of the poem suggests that the speaker is on solid ground with human relationship and on solid ground with a spiritual relationship, no fluff or excess. The message I get is in the title, love for the speaker goes on always.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2016
Comment from Dustybones
Timeless... well I liked your poem. Keeping love present, alive, and lustful will make love last many years. Off topic... I like what you have to say. dustybones
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Timeless... well I liked your poem. Keeping love present, alive, and lustful will make love last many years. Off topic... I like what you have to say. dustybones
Comment Written 11-Nov-2016
