Gang of Slugs
I find evidence in my yard that something has been there.35 total reviews
Comment from foxangie123
Now this is great penning and poetry in my book. This put a huge smile on my face indeed and an out loud chuckle. More please very soon.
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Now this is great penning and poetry in my book. This put a huge smile on my face indeed and an out loud chuckle. More please very soon.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2016
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Thank you for your enthusiasm.
Comment from Dean Kuch
So, are we to assume that you will be having a slimy slumble in the very near future then, Mary?
Sounds interesting, I wish I could attend.
Best wishes to you in the contest,
~Dean
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So, are we to assume that you will be having a slimy slumble in the very near future then, Mary?
Sounds interesting, I wish I could attend.
Best wishes to you in the contest,
~Dean
Comment Written 30-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2016
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Not if the slugs stay away.
Comment from ronnie k
LOL, lets put aside the rule book and take a good look and an even bigger review
, well for me not a follow of style I read an EXCEPTIONAL poem, MARYKELLY, I will remember to become your fan.
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LOL, lets put aside the rule book and take a good look and an even bigger review
, well for me not a follow of style I read an EXCEPTIONAL poem, MARYKELLY, I will remember to become your fan.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2016
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Thank you for your enthusiasm.
Comment from djeckert
an entertaining little write. I had no idea slugs can leave such a mess. I loved your description. They are creepy little creatures. A fun read. God surely blesses you.
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an entertaining little write. I had no idea slugs can leave such a mess. I loved your description. They are creepy little creatures. A fun read. God surely blesses you.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2016
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Thank you for your positive comments.
Comment from Neonewman
Ha! We often see them on our concrete steps and screen doors here! Nasty little markings they leave behind. I love the fact that you and the slugs will have a rumble. Caught myself laughing over this one.
God bless and best wishes in the contest,.
Steve
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2016
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Ha! We often see them on our concrete steps and screen doors here! Nasty little markings they leave behind. I love the fact that you and the slugs will have a rumble. Caught myself laughing over this one.
God bless and best wishes in the contest,.
Steve
Comment Written 30-Oct-2016
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Happy you can appreciate the little creatures.
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lol
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I have to admit that gave me a good laugh. the idea of slugs tagging gardens is superb. great imagery invoked.
All the best
GMG
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Hi there,
I have to admit that gave me a good laugh. the idea of slugs tagging gardens is superb. great imagery invoked.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 30-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2016
Thank you for joining the humor.
Comment from c_lucas
The slime trailing can be dangerous if one doesn't move cautiously. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
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The slime trailing can be dangerous if one doesn't move cautiously. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2016
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Thank you for your positive comments.
Comment from joannakruk
Superb expression of the frustration these little critters cause. Even worse when they attack a flowering veggie patch.
Best line
I found their graffiti all over the place at dawn's first light.
Love the imagery of graffiti.
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Superb expression of the frustration these little critters cause. Even worse when they attack a flowering veggie patch.
Best line
I found their graffiti all over the place at dawn's first light.
Love the imagery of graffiti.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2016
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Thank you for your very positive comments.
Comment from seaglass
A perfect quadrant showing the any element of nature can inspire poetry. We gave these pesky crawlers in northern California. Last year they ate my morning glories to the ground in one night. Neighbors say to put beer in a disposable our tin. They love it and drink their slimy little selves to death.
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A perfect quadrant showing the any element of nature can inspire poetry. We gave these pesky crawlers in northern California. Last year they ate my morning glories to the ground in one night. Neighbors say to put beer in a disposable our tin. They love it and drink their slimy little selves to death.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2016
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That solution is certainly better than a rumble. Thank you for your good words and observations.
Comment from Teri7
I really enjoyed reading and reviewing this poem. I, too, have have those slugs come around our house too leaving their mark all over. Very good descriptive wording and great imagery. Best wishes in the contest. hugs, Teri
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I really enjoyed reading and reviewing this poem. I, too, have have those slugs come around our house too leaving their mark all over. Very good descriptive wording and great imagery. Best wishes in the contest. hugs, Teri
Comment Written 29-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016
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Thank you for the very positive comments.