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Comment from Gloria ....
What a hoot, Mav. It's great fun watching each entry bringing forward their own interest in FanStory. I think I'm learning more about people reading this contest than any single contest to date.
Having said that I think you got the mains points out about prose and poetry. And I was thinking this week you want to have us write Halloween speeches for either Trump or Clinton. That might be a blast.
Great job with this and I wish you all the best in the contest. Is eight dollars a month right? It's more reasonable if you buy a two year membership isn't it?
Ange.
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What a hoot, Mav. It's great fun watching each entry bringing forward their own interest in FanStory. I think I'm learning more about people reading this contest than any single contest to date.
Having said that I think you got the mains points out about prose and poetry. And I was thinking this week you want to have us write Halloween speeches for either Trump or Clinton. That might be a blast.
Great job with this and I wish you all the best in the contest. Is eight dollars a month right? It's more reasonable if you buy a two year membership isn't it?
Ange.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2016
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, I'll guarantee it gets their attention. Nothing sells better than sex, even if it isn't happening. There only has to be a glance or an insinuation that it's there. Kinda like a snake in a bush. Of course, you and I would probably be the only two to understand that last line, other than maybe Gloria. LOL! Great job. :-)
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Well, I'll guarantee it gets their attention. Nothing sells better than sex, even if it isn't happening. There only has to be a glance or an insinuation that it's there. Kinda like a snake in a bush. Of course, you and I would probably be the only two to understand that last line, other than maybe Gloria. LOL! Great job. :-)
Comment Written 25-Oct-2016
Comment from Sankey
This was good, mate. I liked the inference of another lover, hehe. No love lost with me and Fanstory for sure.Do you use Grammarly? Jax Franklin told me Grammarly is no good for commas. Of course[,] you think
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This was good, mate. I liked the inference of another lover, hehe. No love lost with me and Fanstory for sure.Do you use Grammarly? Jax Franklin told me Grammarly is no good for commas. Of course[,] you think
Comment Written 25-Oct-2016
Comment from Pantygynt
Yes indeed. Lord preserve us from the truth the whole truth and the awful truth. Come on now. Would this really gain subscribers? It was very amusing though. Well that's about that. As I already said there is someone else. Loads of 'em actually
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Yes indeed. Lord preserve us from the truth the whole truth and the awful truth. Come on now. Would this really gain subscribers? It was very amusing though. Well that's about that. As I already said there is someone else. Loads of 'em actually
Comment Written 25-Oct-2016
Comment from Dustybones
That's the spirit of Fanstory. I didn't get a warning for such a steamy advertisment. Funny as you always are with a golden imagination. dustybones-Boyd
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That's the spirit of Fanstory. I didn't get a warning for such a steamy advertisment. Funny as you always are with a golden imagination. dustybones-Boyd
Comment Written 25-Oct-2016
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hahaha, awesome commercial, it's funny.I like how you gave visual stage direction. This is a good contender in the contest. Good job sweetie pie. Good luck.
Luv ya
Gypsy hugs
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Hahaha, awesome commercial, it's funny.I like how you gave visual stage direction. This is a good contender in the contest. Good job sweetie pie. Good luck.
Luv ya
Gypsy hugs
Comment Written 25-Oct-2016
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I love the humor you added to the piece and even though it is absolutely wonderful, a lot of truth has been brought out, like an addicition of sorts. I know one writer that is on here 16 hours of every day. Wow
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I love the humor you added to the piece and even though it is absolutely wonderful, a lot of truth has been brought out, like an addicition of sorts. I know one writer that is on here 16 hours of every day. Wow
Comment Written 25-Oct-2016
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Hahahaha a loving romance with the computer screen. I can see myself there. I spend 80% of my awake time with my lover Fanstory, luckily, I have no other lover that needs attention. Lol.
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Hahahaha a loving romance with the computer screen. I can see myself there. I spend 80% of my awake time with my lover Fanstory, luckily, I have no other lover that needs attention. Lol.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2016
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Oh, too true. Fanstory is definitely one of my two loves. Fanstory and my dear beagle, Katie Jo who is helping me type this -- the spags are hers! Delightful entry for this contest, my friend. Well done, mikey~Debbie
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Oh, too true. Fanstory is definitely one of my two loves. Fanstory and my dear beagle, Katie Jo who is helping me type this -- the spags are hers! Delightful entry for this contest, my friend. Well done, mikey~Debbie
Comment Written 25-Oct-2016
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
But... where's the script? Why did you stop there? We need at least five hundred words to judge this for the contest. I don't understand why you cut it off here. ?
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But... where's the script? Why did you stop there? We need at least five hundred words to judge this for the contest. I don't understand why you cut it off here. ?
Comment Written 25-Oct-2016