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Comment from artemis53
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You did well, I would've gone off saying...well we truly don't need to hear it. Love your well-executed experiences about this life. You've helped me to make more memorable vacations ;)

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 Comment Written 17-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2016
    Thank you Artemis. They said there was probably water to in the gas line.
Comment from robyn corum
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Tom,

This sounds like QUITE the adventure! *smile* I have to wonder exactly how many times that boat must have been out on the water before y'all... Sounds like it was well-used. hahahaha

One tiny note:
1.) while that leaky Lund wildly wobbled (fore?) and aft.

Thanks!

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 Comment Written 17-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2016
    Good catch. Thanks.