Geoffrey's Musings.
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 " The Confused Colours."A book of Stories, Essays and Poetry.
25 total reviews
Comment from Liberty Justice
NICE! Good short play. Very interesting play. Would make a nice play for a longer literary work. Seems patient is a hypercondriac someone while always thinks something is wrong with him. What have you been up to, Sankey?
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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NICE! Good short play. Very interesting play. Would make a nice play for a longer literary work. Seems patient is a hypercondriac someone while always thinks something is wrong with him. What have you been up to, Sankey?
Comment Written 16-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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Hi old friend. Was dealing with Depression and resulting writer's block! Have a look around you will find something to disagree about hehe. Not you I don't think! We are made writing atm. Cheers. Thanks for the review.
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I am so sorry about your issues. I hope you are better. You can buy my book, Soothing Words Spoken from the Heart, sold on www.createspace.com and www.amazon.com. My lovely book may cheer you up. Don't let the world's woes get you down, or your own troubles. lol liberty justice
Comment from seaglass
Lol, very funny but you may hear protests from blondes. Did you hear about the blonde who put whiteout on her computer screen to correct errors?
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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Lol, very funny but you may hear protests from blondes. Did you hear about the blonde who put whiteout on her computer screen to correct errors?
Comment Written 16-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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Hehe yeah have heard that one ha! There are a lot of them around. Yeah I will probably get them but lets face it Blondes and Brunettes are all just a dumb at times hehe.
Thanks.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Geoff
= Very clever!
= Poor girl, she has issues.
= Great artwork paired with it too.
= You should write more scripts. You're good at it.
<> A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-down (*>*)
<> Cheers & Blessings <> Jax
<> Published as <> Jacqueline M Franklin
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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Hi, Geoff
= Very clever!
= Poor girl, she has issues.
= Great artwork paired with it too.
= You should write more scripts. You're good at it.
<> A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-down (*>*)
<> Cheers & Blessings <> Jax
<> Published as <> Jacqueline M Franklin
Comment Written 16-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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Hi Sis, got some photos and a movie of the lesion this morning. Hang around. Did I do it right with the Cast etc in the Author notes?
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Looks good to me. (*<*)
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OK Have a look at Warts and Thoughts I changed the picture to the one Louise took this morning. We accidentally had the movie option turned on at first but it was too large to upload.
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YUK! Bet that didn't feel good!
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Hurts everytime we replace the bandaids and it bleeds..I got the movie on Face book yay!
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Funny. My wife is a hypocrondiac. Every time she reads about a disease on the internet, the next day she comes down with it. The last time she went to the doctor she asked, "What should I do about all these maladies i keep coming down with?"
"Stay off the internet."
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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Funny. My wife is a hypocrondiac. Every time she reads about a disease on the internet, the next day she comes down with it. The last time she went to the doctor she asked, "What should I do about all these maladies i keep coming down with?"
"Stay off the internet."
Comment Written 16-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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Hey beaudy, mate. Hehe! it does seem a bit that way some times with some. Hope she ain't a blonde hehe!
Comment from Dean Kuch
Oh, for Heaven's sakes, Geoff, heh-heh.
Poor girl. I'm afraid she may also be suffering from some sort of Dain Bramage as well.
Very funny, and thanks for the laugh.
I needed one today.
God bless.
~Dean
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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Oh, for Heaven's sakes, Geoff, heh-heh.
Poor girl. I'm afraid she may also be suffering from some sort of Dain Bramage as well.
Very funny, and thanks for the laugh.
I needed one today.
God bless.
~Dean
Comment Written 16-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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Thanks mate glad you enjoyed that. Getting a lot of thumbs ups from your Siggy!
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My pleasure, cobber.
~Dean
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Very cute story put into a play format. Chasenov used to do that a lot, too. I find it entertaining and clever. Great job. I hope you do more,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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Very cute story put into a play format. Chasenov used to do that a lot, too. I find it entertaining and clever. Great job. I hope you do more,
Rhonda
Comment Written 16-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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Thanks, Sis glad you enjoyed it. Seems Writer's Block has moved out of town ha!
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Wooo hooo!!!
Comment from RonCraig
Hey Mate,
Very funny my friend and not one I'd heard before. Seeking to build up your credits for script writing I see here. You must have gotten the bug with all of these recent posts, good for you,
Ron
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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Hey Mate,
Very funny my friend and not one I'd heard before. Seeking to build up your credits for script writing I see here. You must have gotten the bug with all of these recent posts, good for you,
Ron
Comment Written 16-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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Yeah mate. Something is afoot or whatever. Where have the Watsons gone?
Comment from oliver818
I always liked that joke. Nice little play, I hope you can have it acted out somewhere. Thanks for sharing and have a great day!
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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I always liked that joke. Nice little play, I hope you can have it acted out somewhere. Thanks for sharing and have a great day!
Comment Written 16-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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Thanks mate glad you liked it. Naturally it was no mine in the first place. Cheers.
Comment from Ben Colder
Here, they not necessary need to be blond. LOL. I get it . Cute joke. Thanks Sankey for sharing the wit this morning. Starts my day with a smile.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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Here, they not necessary need to be blond. LOL. I get it . Cute joke. Thanks Sankey for sharing the wit this morning. Starts my day with a smile.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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ha starting the day and I am about to go to bed. Lord Bless thanks for coming by.
Comment from Alex Rosel
Receptionist: "Yes, come through, please." - Wouldn't the receptionist say go through, please? I'm assuming the doctor's room is different from the waiting room.
You've used two exclamation marks in this short script. I think, in general, screenplay writers avoid using exclamation marks. It gives actors more scope to interpret the role as they see fit.
Ha,ha. But that's a good joke. It put a smile on my face. Neatly done :-)
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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Receptionist: "Yes, come through, please." - Wouldn't the receptionist say go through, please? I'm assuming the doctor's room is different from the waiting room.
You've used two exclamation marks in this short script. I think, in general, screenplay writers avoid using exclamation marks. It gives actors more scope to interpret the role as they see fit.
Ha,ha. But that's a good joke. It put a smile on my face. Neatly done :-)
Comment Written 16-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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Thanks Alex I did wonder about the exclamation marks. First attempt at this and I will make the suggested changed, thanks heaps!👍
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Changes Made
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