Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Well, depending on Steve's relationship with the lovely Lisa (girlfriend, unmarried, considers her as nothing more than a "friend with benefits"...you know, that sort of thing), this is a ringtone which could certainly be construed as disturbing.
Best of luck.
~Dean

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016

LOL! Thank you for the awesome review Dean!
God bless!
Steve

Comment from Wabigoon

Excellent

Neo--
This is like the joke where I feel left out. I don't own a cellphone or iPhone so don't know what "disturbing ringtones" are so I'm a bit like the old fogey in your picture who I'm sure is part of the joke I don't get. I get the gist of it, just not the joke of it.

Thanks
Wabigoon/Jeff

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016

LOL! That's ok Jeff. I can't imagine life without my cell at this stage in life. I do remember there was a lot more one on one conversations and fun before they came into play.
God bless!
Steve

Comment from Spiritual Echo

Excellent

Fun and very clever. Now why is it you appeared and then disappeared again? You seemed genuinely happy to be back in the writing game ... then radio silence.

Stay with us. I enjoy your voice.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016

Awe! Thank you Spiritual for this touching and inspiring review my friend. I am happiest when I write but work an reconstruction on my home has taken most of my time here of late. I love hearing your voice as well my friend.
God bless!

Comment from jlsavell

Excellent

neowoman, now how do I review something so very short??/ Oh yes, I can just imagine.. well I think I have made that call a time or two to my husband.. it should have waited till he got home, because he had to stop at a bar to let the news settle way down.. well done.. jlsavell

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016

LOL! Too funny! I think most men share his nervous tendencies.
God bless!

reply by jlsavell on 04-Sep-2016

lol.. I remember we were struggling financially and had two under the age of 4, when I told him, he said.. get this.. "Now Jimi, how the hell did that happen?!""" Really.. well let me see.. "I dunno lover boy, one too many cool nights trying to get warm? The bubble gum I picked up at the variety store? Oh no wait! The city, its the cities fault! They neglected to warn us of the effects of water, but you know lover boy, granny said it was because of our broken tv. Imagine that, a tv goes on the blink and I get pregnant. Faulty wiring perhaps. I dunno lover boy." lol

reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016

LOL! Someone put on facebook the other day. I wonder what my parents did with no internet, cell phones etc. I aske my other 14 brothers and sisters and they said they didn't know either lol.

Comment from humpwhistle

Excellent

Aye, that news would certainly disturb me.
And my name isn't even Steve!
I guess I just have a naturally guilty conscience.

This is very funny.
I'd plead 'mixed messages.'

Best of luck at the polls.

Peace, Lee



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 Comment Written 04-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016

LOL! Thank you Lee for the awesome review.
God bless!