Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Here's to all dreamers! I relished your reference to Michelangelo and his Sistine Chapel masterpiece and your three-line stanzas filled with imagery. Big cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2016

Good evening Moon-flower...-smile-
ah yes where would the world be without us...but a big round circumference of flourishing animal life. you know its always a two way street J...look both ways...haha...how are you...getting better...? love-

reply by Joan E. on 06-Aug-2016

Yes, I always look both ways, and thanks for thinking about me--I am making progress and have another physical therapy session this coming Thursday. Be well and stay well- Joan

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Reconciled,

I'm getting so forgetful I don't remember people's names anymore. Not even my grandkids names. I never thought I'd turn out this way, but the older I get the more forgetful I get. I loved your poem. As usual you did a really good job in writing it and I really enjoyed reading it.

Kat

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2016

Mom....its me...you said you were gonna stop doing that, it freaks me out for weeks. -headtilt-...yoo hoo its Michael...you're other kid...Jesus.......haha....love you-

reply by MizKat on 06-Aug-2016

Love you my other son! Mom Kat

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

I like this. God said 'Let there be light, and the beautiful dreamer was born.' That's the way I've always seen it....God created us....we create, striving for the unmatchable beauty....lovely....blessings...

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2016

yes...should I change it...?
I mean I know what He said...literally...but I was speaking ah well both metaphorically and reality "let there be life"...because you know He created us....ah do you think I should change it...? thank you...love Michael

reply by Irish Rain on 05-Aug-2016

NO!!!!! Love it exactly as it is!!!! God said' Let us create man in our image'...obviously He didn't mean human....the Holy Spirit is a spirit, God is a spirit....no, He meant, ....creators!!!! Beautiful dreamers!!!! You nailed it.

reply by the author on 05-Aug-2016

-headnod-...alright good...thats what i thought...thank you-

reply by Irish Rain on 05-Aug-2016

You're so welcome!!

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Thanks to God, there is a dreamer in all of is. There is also talent of many kinds in all of us. Your poem is eloquently worded.

teresa

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2016

I know that Teresa...
every life has its own song...worthy to be heard.
what woulds be without a Forrest of trees...-smile-...hope you've been okay. love Michael

reply by the author on 05-Aug-2016

wha...wha...whaaat...-headtilt-.....ahaha...its the music, I'm sure of it...haha...woods...what would the woods be....ah forget it...can you say Peter Piper picked a pickled herring up by its tail...twenty five times...without losing your mind...me either...-smile-

Comment from Gianinas

Exceptional

I can read many times this poem, while listening to the beautiful music, and experience remembrance, sympathy, warmth, even love. I take it from the beginning and I smile again. Thank you,
Gianina

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2016

woo -smile-...thank you.
you've made my night with those words of yours. appreciate you stopping by with beauty's warmth. love to you...Michael

Comment from liz burgoyne

Excellent

Your poem is overwhelmingly beautiful. I liked the way you gave the first verse a style of its own. That seemed to be the introduction. The following thoughts match through rhythm. Creating a a work of art takes perseverance dedication and hard work. The only thing that talent does is make art look easy.

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2016

Really Liz...? I mean thank you for feeling that...-smile-...I havent been feeling like writing lately. I wrote this today when I came home from work. I been feeling better...the best damn Poet this side a Shakespearean experience got my back...and Moreen posted....-smile- how could I not feel better...now this...-smile-...thank you Liz. love Michael

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

Hi Mike and hope all is well.
I watchex Tutanic and there was a scene with art that Rose was unpacking..
Her asshole fiance have a negative reply about how that artist would never amount to anything...

And he said...
"What's his name again...
Rembrandt?
Nice work...
Love art.
RICKY1024 ..

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2016

LOL.....ah another "expert" opinion...ahaha...thanks Rick , i needed that. love to you Bro...michael

reply by Ricky1024 on 06-Aug-2016

Continued message....The movie Titanic had that "Art Painting Scene" ANF Ros' e fiance made a point to mention that ger painter would never amount to anything...
,In other wors...
He,was putting dowm....
REBRANT!"
Now🕭

reply by the author on 06-Aug-2016

I know Bro...thats what I was laughing at...."another "expert"...have a great day...-smile-

Comment from Susanne M. Psyris

Excellent

Wow! Reconciled...this is so awesome. I thoroughly love the language used and the imagery created. What lovely artwork! This is true art written that moves the reader deeply. Loved the last verse. Great job all around. God bless and hugs, Susanne

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 Comment Written 05-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2016

Hi Sue...-smile-
woo...wow...? well....thank you...I was listening to the song sucking on a pacifer and...wah la...haha...really appreciate this Sue. love to you...michael