City streets
6 word poem19 total reviews
Comment from trishg11
A lot said with 6 words and a picture. It was easy for me to be in the surreal experience of the onlookers in the photograph and reflect on the depth of the few words you shared in this poem. It is difficult to watch what is happening so frequently in our world these days. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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A lot said with 6 words and a picture. It was easy for me to be in the surreal experience of the onlookers in the photograph and reflect on the depth of the few words you shared in this poem. It is difficult to watch what is happening so frequently in our world these days. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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Yes our world seems to be crazy these days ! Thank you for reading zanya
Comment from Nika2016
This is one of the best of the little poems on the site...war's theatre...in crimson...
This gives a whole new meaning to "taking it to the streets"...
Today's warrior is a street warrior...
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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This is one of the best of the little poems on the site...war's theatre...in crimson...
This gives a whole new meaning to "taking it to the streets"...
Today's warrior is a street warrior...
Comment Written 24-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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Yes something sinister is happening ! Thank you for reading zanya
Comment from Bollie
This is a really good poem for the 6 words poetry contest. The message that the blood in the streets reveals the confrontations between urban Americans and the police is very profound. For so few words you certainly said a mouthful. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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This is a really good poem for the 6 words poetry contest. The message that the blood in the streets reveals the confrontations between urban Americans and the police is very profound. For so few words you certainly said a mouthful. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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Thank you for reading & critique zanya
Comment from RoostyNester
War is prevalent in almost every place we look today! Your poem is well done, eluding to streets of blood and war! I liked your short 6 word poem.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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War is prevalent in almost every place we look today! Your poem is well done, eluding to streets of blood and war! I liked your short 6 word poem.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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Thanks for reading and the critique zanya
Comment from royowen
A very well written six word poem as an entry in this six word contest, this is an excellent attempt , it's not easy to win these contest types, but this is a good chance, good luck, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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A very well written six word poem as an entry in this six word contest, this is an excellent attempt , it's not easy to win these contest types, but this is a good chance, good luck, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 24-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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And thanks for reading zanya
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Most welcome
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork.
-You have used your six words creatively.
-Amazing what meaning can come from those few words.
-Good imagery in line one.
-It sets the scene.
-Good connection between the two lines.
-You also make a good point in the last line.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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-Good artwork.
-You have used your six words creatively.
-Amazing what meaning can come from those few words.
-Good imagery in line one.
-It sets the scene.
-Good connection between the two lines.
-You also make a good point in the last line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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Thanks for this comprehensive review zanya
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You are welcome.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Vividly portrayed illustration of the results of the terrorists acts occurring around the world captured in this poem.
Unfortunately, until the terrorists are curtailed the crimson will flow.
Should be a good contest entry for this piece.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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Vividly portrayed illustration of the results of the terrorists acts occurring around the world captured in this poem.
Unfortunately, until the terrorists are curtailed the crimson will flow.
Should be a good contest entry for this piece.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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Yes our world is strange these days ! Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from jusylee72
Nice descriptive story in only six words. Great accomplishment . Choice of picture sets a calm scene , the words infer that action will happen soon. Who will start it?
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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Nice descriptive story in only six words. Great accomplishment . Choice of picture sets a calm scene , the words infer that action will happen soon. Who will start it?
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Comment Written 23-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Ricky1024
Another Six WORD poem entree.
As easy as 1to 3...
But, money here is quite dear..
So, along now you must go with your 6..
And luck be with you and grab the tricks!
RICKY1024
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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Another Six WORD poem entree.
As easy as 1to 3...
But, money here is quite dear..
So, along now you must go with your 6..
And luck be with you and grab the tricks!
RICKY1024
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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Thanks for reading zanya