Act of Endurance
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Comment from Susan Larson
I read your poem three times and just don't have what it takes to understand it. It is very deep and I actually find it good that someone out there is writing poetry to satisfy the intellect of those above my pay grade.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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I read your poem three times and just don't have what it takes to understand it. It is very deep and I actually find it good that someone out there is writing poetry to satisfy the intellect of those above my pay grade.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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Don't put yourself short, given statements the world lost these realities centuries ago. You should consider yourself one step ahead of most. Thanking you for your generous rate despite connection and that welcomed comment.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is really deep, but I just can't seem to understand it. I checked out your other reviews in the hope someone had seen what I missed. But they didn't. I'm sure there is an explanation, but even your authors notes didn't help me. Perhaps I'm thick? :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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This is really deep, but I just can't seem to understand it. I checked out your other reviews in the hope someone had seen what I missed. But they didn't. I'm sure there is an explanation, but even your authors notes didn't help me. Perhaps I'm thick? :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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Not you sis, given thought is prior God introduction of himself to Angel host. The beginning of earth and flesh in known existence. Thanking you for your generous rate despite and that welcomed comment.
Comment from padumachitta
hello
ah looking for meaning. This is a look inot light and dark, and maybe, maybe balance.
Me thinks, if one is scared of the darkness one can not see the light.
and the universerve.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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hello
ah looking for meaning. This is a look inot light and dark, and maybe, maybe balance.
Me thinks, if one is scared of the darkness one can not see the light.
and the universerve.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Great outlook on existing, finding myself with the twelves doors of probabilities for every issue, having only one choice. Thanking you for your generous rate and unusual response. Great shout
Comment from Begin Again
Five stars for your ability to reach deep into your mind and compose such a thought-provoking piece of work. Zero for me, or maybe a two, for attempting to follow your words. The artwork is exquisite and it stirred my thinking process. Bravo for your abilities. Smiles to you!
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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Five stars for your ability to reach deep into your mind and compose such a thought-provoking piece of work. Zero for me, or maybe a two, for attempting to follow your words. The artwork is exquisite and it stirred my thinking process. Bravo for your abilities. Smiles to you!
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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Glad certain aspects contained in this write were found appealing, loving that enthusiasm illustrated in your response, delighting me completely. Thanking you for all given. Be safe.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
From time immemorial, man is trying to find the meaning of life and its relationship with existence in general. If we relate the inner demons to darkness, there is no hope. We have to bring in light to defeat it. One should have faith in the Creator. These are a couple of thoughts that came to my mind while reading your interesting poem. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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From time immemorial, man is trying to find the meaning of life and its relationship with existence in general. If we relate the inner demons to darkness, there is no hope. We have to bring in light to defeat it. One should have faith in the Creator. These are a couple of thoughts that came to my mind while reading your interesting poem. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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Profound reasoning delighted that this write stirred up such emotional feelings within, thanking you for all. Be safe.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
nice poem about the beginning of the universe almost a Zoroastrian concept - the battle between light and darkness also a Taoist feel as well
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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nice poem about the beginning of the universe almost a Zoroastrian concept - the battle between light and darkness also a Taoist feel as well
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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Glad certain aspects in this write were found appealing to your interests, thanking you for your generous rate and warming thoughts.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Light and Darkness
by TPAC
Hello, TPAC,
I have read your poem several times and I still don't understand what is about. Something about a time before creation and about truth and lies.
No worries, I just prefer straight forward easy to understand ...for the most part.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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Light and Darkness
by TPAC
Hello, TPAC,
I have read your poem several times and I still don't understand what is about. Something about a time before creation and about truth and lies.
No worries, I just prefer straight forward easy to understand ...for the most part.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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Understood , thanking you for your generous rate despite not be able to connect to its message, conveyed is a time among angel: Satan first lie.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I might far off with my interpretation but I like these lines, it brings balance and reinstates light: "New dark forms there it's obvious statements, sounded opinion hark to first contact by God, stating this existence a remark stated a theory.
Spot formed a mound liar named state realty, theorizing a hole found its pit endless, in fright despair sound it of the dead they entitled deep.
Lad's hand to reveal it bottomless as not right, in the dark spot bright beams about sparkling, equaling the darkness there's a light in this pit." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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I might far off with my interpretation but I like these lines, it brings balance and reinstates light: "New dark forms there it's obvious statements, sounded opinion hark to first contact by God, stating this existence a remark stated a theory.
Spot formed a mound liar named state realty, theorizing a hole found its pit endless, in fright despair sound it of the dead they entitled deep.
Lad's hand to reveal it bottomless as not right, in the dark spot bright beams about sparkling, equaling the darkness there's a light in this pit." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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Appreciating the shout of good well, thanking you for your generous rate and thoughtful comments.
Comment from karenina
I don't know what to say, how to feel. There was something here throughout that stayed just beyond my reach... Something important, relating to pre-creation perhaps? Or am I inserting metaphor where the true meaning is there for me to find and decode? Thought provoking for sure, I need the Cliff's Notes which likely says more about e than about you!--Karenina
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
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I don't know what to say, how to feel. There was something here throughout that stayed just beyond my reach... Something important, relating to pre-creation perhaps? Or am I inserting metaphor where the true meaning is there for me to find and decode? Thought provoking for sure, I need the Cliff's Notes which likely says more about e than about you!--Karenina
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
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No, I believe we all were there for this event, making the divisions among the angels, placing some in flesh. The Holy Text states we will recall this truth. Thanking you for your generous rate and on point defining of this write.
Comment from Janet Foor
Not sure I understand the meaning or the depth of meaning in this poem. I just may be out of my depth here. Day and night is an excellent topic and the origin of day and night is profound.
Thank you for sharing
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
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Not sure I understand the meaning or the depth of meaning in this poem. I just may be out of my depth here. Day and night is an excellent topic and the origin of day and night is profound.
Thank you for sharing
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
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Glad certain aspects were appealing to your interests, thanking you for your generous rate despite the miss connection to thought.