Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Lice love the human hair. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very humorous read. There is very good imagery.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.

Comment from Dutchie

Exceptional

Such a lovely bedtime story, Ine. Yes, especially in summer dogs can have flees...
When you see them scratch you can really get the creeps. Fortunately there are flee collars. I like the end of your story. Fia

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week. Thanks for the lovely six.

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

I think the spelling is fleas. Also necklace. Did you know fleas have probably killed more humans than both World Wars, back in the days of the bubonic plague? Get that boy a collar. Fine youth story.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week. Thanks for the tip. I will change it.

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I love the words the mother use to ease her sons itching... where does these idea come from.
It matters not as long as they work. lol.
Thank you for sharing and for this delightful story.
Cookie

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.

reply by misscookie on 28-Jun-2016

You're very welcome, you do the same.
Cookie

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

I remember those necklaces, I had several as a child. I didn't know you could still get them! LOL, that would be better than a flee collar! What a lovely little story, Ine, you are so good at these, and they always make me smile. :) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

I always feel so sorry for the animals scratching like they do. You write fun, short little bedtime stories Ine:)

Teresa

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Nice bedtime story on everyday life.
I remember the necklace of sweets and what a wonderful treat to have that goes on and on.
Very nicely done

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

A very cute story about a child and his dog. The dog has fleas and needs a flea color. Douglas thinks he has fleas because he's thinking about it too hard.

One Spag; neckless is necklace.

Take care,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week. Thanks for spotting this mistake.,

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a cute story with which to finish your book of children's stories. Have a wonderful week and may you find great blessings. Patricia

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.

Comment from Zue65

Excellent

Surely little children will love this story about dogs , flees and flee collar. Little children are easily attracted to dogs and would grab any story about their favorite pet. Thanks for sharing. All the best.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.