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Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "The nest"
Many bedtime stories for children.

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Comment from misscookie
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You captured my attention from the first line to the last
I enjoyed reading your story about how the parents feed their babies
You got me good when it came to the poop falling on dads head. I couldn't stop laughing.
That's why my people wear caps or hats.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2016
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend.
Comment from TAB_that's me
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I love birds and watching them. This is a cute and fun story and I loved the humorous pooh ending - lol. At first I forgot that in other parts of the world, what we call diapers are called nappies. I like that word better than diapers.

Teresa

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2016
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend.
Comment from Zue65
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Ha, ha, you made me laugh, I love the wit and humor of the author making this simple family bonding an interesting, light exchange of information and teaching the facts of life to little kids through the birds feeding its babies. Thanks for sharing an excellent write.

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2016
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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HAHAHA. Pretty funny Ine. I never had pondered about birds pooing in their nest. I'm sure the parents take care of the poo until they are old enough to stick their behinds over the edge. LOL Good job, good lesson for children. xx Nancy

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 Comment Written 18-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2016
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend.
Comment from MizKat
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Hi Ine,

What a cute little story this is. I really enjoyed reading it as you did a great job in writing it. I even got a little laugh at the end of it when one of the babies pooh fell on his daddy's head. Wonderful story, my friend.

Kat

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 Comment Written 18-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2016
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend.
reply by MizKat on 18-Jun-2016
    You're very welcome. I intend to have a great week-end and other nice days.

    Kat